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By : CandyMoore
  • From ANON - Raz Gaiale on August 09, 2003
    I know how pesky thateal eal life" thing can be. I hope everything's going ok for you.

    I was quite shocked by developments in this chapter. You managed to fit a lot in a short space. Jack's previous relationship with Bootstrap, Barbossa's pre-execution torture....Maybe you could delve a bit into Barbossa's past and the reason he does the things he does (if he actually has any reasons!).

    I'm both looking forward to and dreading the next chapter, seeing what Barbossa does to Jack and how he captures Will....You always manage to keep me guessing and anxious for more of this story! Please update soon! :)
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  • From ANON - Heather on August 05, 2003
    It's getting good!It's 2:30am and i thought i would catch up:),keep writing!!Maybe i should sleep now,lol
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  • From ANON - XxSablexX on August 01, 2003
    Hey-lo! I just read your story! ONE OF THE BEST FANFIC EVER!!!! No lie... I am like, in love with Captain Barbossa (despits evs evilness) and I think that you managed to cpature his stunning *so-called evillness* in this story! I also love Jack, so I can fell somehwat bad for him... But I honestly think you should keep up the Jack pain for a little while longer. Then maybe Jack could start planning a daring escape, and blah blah blah. Your the author, I'm merely ateempting to express my opinion! Well, on other things... I just wanted to let you know that your story is awesome, and I am awaiting the next chapter. PLZ HURRY! lol. Best of luck to ye!
    XxSablexX
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  • From ANON - Twr § r on August 01, 2003
    now thats what i call refreshing! after 2rs ors of looking on the internet for barbossa action and only turning up plenty of mary-sues and some sweet sappy
    w/j hapeningadinading this story is such a releif! its incredibly twisted and nasty and just how i like it! mmmm i cannot wait for the next part....more jack torture would
    be my preferrence but it would be just as nice to add a little will into the mix... i only demand one thing : MORE!
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  • From ANON - Viviana on August 01, 2003
    Please continue the Jack pain. It was sooo good. Love the way you make Barbossa soooo evil. lol :-D Keep up the good writing.
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  • From ANON - Some person who likes pie on July 31, 2003
    Jack pain! Continue Jack pain! Need Jack pain!
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  • From NitaRiddle on July 30, 2003
    I love your work but as the unofficial cool pirates fic reviewer, i must say, i will hang you with your intestines if you do not coutinue. Ofcourse, only doing that after I boil your eyes out with a heated brand and whipping you with a cat o nine, savvy?

    -stares-

    Okaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay, no more studying 17th century torture styles.

    Amazing clarity in overall Barbosa Asshole ness. or is it Arsehole. Still haven't firgured out the proper dexterity for those words in the english dilect.

    -shrugs-

    Beautiful work and I must insist you to countinue this story if you don't mind because of just the way you are the first person I have read who has managed to understand Hector Barbossa and do his character justice.
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  • From ANON - Misty on July 30, 2003
    Keep it on Jack for a little! Please? Btw, this is a really great story ^.~ Good goin.
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  • From ANON - FrankieInAHat on July 30, 2003
    Methinks you should do both ^^. have a little Jack pain on the boat while they drag Will in. ...'course if you write anything really, I'll be happy! ::huggles::
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  • From ANON - Myk on July 30, 2003
    My, my, I am lazy. I haven't logged in for a single review. But that is not the point. Your fic is definitely coming along nicely. I am definitely liking these flashbacks that explain how Barbossa got them and whatnot. Good show, good show. I can't wait for more chapters.

    Sorry for not reviewing the last chapter, but I just got eadieading it today. It was lovely as well.

    Keep up the great work. 'Til the next.

    Myk
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  • From ANON - Rommie on July 30, 2003
    I'm liking this know, it's starting to get a brillient plot and it's original, to start with I thought it was just an excuse for hot sex (not that there's anything wrong with that) but I'm finding it easier to read with the other stuff. but I love your imagery, especially in your first couple of chapter, with the fruit and flavours stuff. Keep going and update soon.
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  • From ANON - Beth on July 30, 2003
    yeah for an update!, *and backstory* Somethings make more sense now::grins:: Darn Barbossa for coming back. More soon, hopefully more J/W, maybe????... =)
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  • From ANON - Pookie on July 29, 2003
    so Barbossa snuck on board... he may be a mean pirate, but he's not stupid.

    I am fuzzled on the crew thing... weren't most of them dead or in prison? Or did I read that in another fic? (I'm on PotC slash overload! weee!)

    I'm a little afraid to read how they get Will... of course that doesn't stop me from begging you to update as quickly as possible!


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  • From ANON - Raz Gaiale on July 29, 2003
    Thank God you updated! I've been going out of my mind wondering what's going to happen next in this story. It's addictive. :)
    This chapter was really good, and it's got me really, really wanting to know how Barbossa captures Will. Please, update soo)

    )


    My rabbit ate the last apple in the house.....What am I gonna do NOW? ;)~
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  • From Aithilin on July 29, 2003
    Mmm. Deffinately hooked. I'll kill Barbossa myself if he hurts Will... too much. ;)

    Can't wait for the next update, I love how this is written.

    -Aithilin
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