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Reviews for Honeymoon Nightmare

By : LRThunder
  • From ANON - Anon on May 30, 2005
    Nice
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  • From ANON - GylzGirl on May 06, 2004
    I thought this was quite good. It did feel a little rushed though. If I were to offer any beta suggestions it would be that you've got a plausible story here, slow it down and flesh it out a little bit more. Us folks will still read it if it's longer, promise :)

    Good job!

    GG
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  • From ANON - KagomeReborn on July 23, 2003
    never heard of a oklahoma lemon, but it was good, email if you continue it please...
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