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Reviews for Bittersweet

By : Alisteal
  • From ANON - Jade on March 14, 2004
    I thought that was awasome so sweet so what i was looking for. I loved itnEVER SAY IT SUCKED AGAIN that was cool

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  • From ANON - Eci_Frog on February 22, 2004
    I`m wiping my tears now. So sad, but wit a happy end. It`s brilliant, just brilliant.
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  • From ANON - driretlan on January 09, 2004
    this didn't suck. it is perfect to start a little series of stories. keep going with this story i got a feeling that it is going to be a winner.
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  • From ANON - Meril on October 19, 2003
    simply lovely and very sweet. iloved it!
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  • From ANON - GundamNymph on July 22, 2003
    It didn't totally suck! You're too hard on yourself!

    The idea is GREAT, and it has a great plot. There are VERY few errors that I noticed, and the only other thing that 'sucked', was that Will was OOC. I mean (and I say this in the kindest waom oom one author to another) Will may be broken, but he's like a school girl, having problems with raging hormones. *giggles* Like PMS or a pregnant woman. *pictures the image and bursts out laughing*

    Yes, it would be good for Will to be broken and angsty, but have him still hide his emotions from Jack. He doesn't know that he's found the bottle. He doesn't want to scare his true love away.

    The scene of him in the ocean was LOVELY, as are some of the other images. I can sill ill crying silently, but I can't really see him sobbing (unless he's completely pissed drunk). I see him as the type to wipe away his tears and pretend he wasn't caught crying (unless Jack beats some sense into him ^__^)

    Like I said, a GREAT story so far, there are just a FEW adjustments you need. I wouldn't mind reading it again. obabobably will, if no one else updates their PotC fics soon.

    I DO hope to see more from you soon, and I hope I helped you (and didn't scare you away)

    Hugs and Love^_~GN
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  • From ANON - Jane Silver on July 21, 2003
    If you want to unsuck this then hear is what you do, you right another chapter. And just between you and me, it didn't suck that much. Its nice to read a good sappy romance once in a wial.
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  • From ANON - Mrs.Sparrow on July 21, 2003
    It didn't suck! All these Jack/Will Fictions mostly have sex in them. It's really nice to read a Jack/Will fic that's not about sex!
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  • From ANON - Nita on July 20, 2003
    I have one thing to say to you.

    LIAR~!

    That was a suberb piece of fanfiction, a bit soap opera ish, try to tone it down slightly and explain a bit more in your fic. DOn't count yourself down.

    It was a lovely beginging, if you don't keep writing I'll cull you.

    Until the next review....
    Nita!
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  • From ANON - Insane Pirate on July 20, 2003
    This was so good it made me cry. I hope there's a sequel.
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  • From ANON - Meia on July 19, 2003
    I loved that! It was really sweet!
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  • From ANON - Silver on July 19, 2003
    I noticed you didn't have any reviews yet, so I decided to leave you one. You're story was so sweet, it was a little on the short side, though, and just a bit OOC, but I liked it anyway. Good job!
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  • From ANON - Denise on July 19, 2003
    Great story I loved it!
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