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By : Aithilin
  • From ANON - Nita on July 20, 2003
    -hugs-

    Wait...

    -pout-

    Fine then, I'll stop threatening your reviews. You did the thing with Anamaria! Yay!!!!!! That's what I love about Jack. A gunn wont make him talk, a jail cell won't make him talk, chain won't make him talk, being hanged work make him talk, getting slapped by Anamaria again, wilAnamAnamaria is the shizzle. Jack is so sweet and darling while being himself, You manage to capture Jack as three dimensional, savvy?

    Wait,lemme explain that better, rather than just create a character you created a person with words. You took the man who boasted and swaggered and waved his hand like a queer from soho, and turned him into a human being, as complex as any normal person walking down the street only more so 'cause he's Captain Jack Sparrow! You show how he shows everypone a diffrent version of himself, being the kind sweet wooing type man near Will, a good friend with Anamaria, the devilish trickster when their on the job, you even show the true essence inside of him that makes him more than just any old pirate, a glorious Cin oin of his own Pirate Ship.

    And you got the "A Pirates life for me" in one of the chapters. Your great.

    Will is having a bad effect on Jack in a way, you can practically watch Jack become slightly more domesticated when he's around Will, and you can see Will being a bit more submissive and relaxed because he's finally come to terms with his pirate blood and is doing what he loves best.

    You may feel that you made Bootstrap a bit too Norrintony in that chapter but remember, even if he is a buckaneer, he has been hired by a high class man who has expectations. is eis expected to be a complete military gentleman with his new boss because it was the way one delt business way back then so, you got him right. You are getting a real knack for making characters complex and realistic.

    Waitin' for the next chapter!

    -hugs-

    Nita!

    -hides shotgun behind back-
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  • From ANON - Meia on July 20, 2003
    I like this chapter, it was kinda sweet, i espically like the part about the parrot having a bad singing voice.
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  • From ANON - Hippy Flower on July 20, 2003
    *SQUEALS* I LOOOOOOVE IT!!!! OMG PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE POST MORE!!
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  • From ANON - D\'Artagnan on July 20, 2003
    Chp. 12: The "Knees. Now." part cracked me up. That's so... um... cute? :P This is the greatesory ory ever! Can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - SanelyChallenged on July 20, 2003
    Yaa! My own evil, evil sponge-like teddybear. Yaa! *gives the author a hug*
    Great fic by the way. Is bootstrap going to go after Jack himself or get killed in the process? Personally i'm hoping for the latter one there. Bootstrap bothers me. ^.^
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  • From ANON - Mel on July 20, 2003
    I like pointless. ^_^ And sleep is for the weak! Never rest, never break! Prooves for some interesting ideas, at leasleast... ^_-

    I think I like Bootstrap just fine, as long as he's not around Norrington. Perhaps the Norrington-ness rubs off on him, eh? It's creepy. But thank you for no wigs ^_- That'd be a sight too much to handle. (And good explanation for his name, sounds plausible. Though why'd someone want to be named after their shoes...)

    I love that song. I find myself singing bits of it now and then... Got pirates on the brain. But I'm curious... how did Elizabeth know it when she was a child? Or at all really, if she's the governor's daughter one would thinkshe wouldn't be around the type to know something like that... Insight?

    See what happens when it gets too early? rencrency is long gone.

    Anyhow, back to topic; the chapter was another fine addition, if not just for the wonderful moment of Jack/Will! Superb! ^_^V
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  • From ANON - Datiye on July 20, 2003
    Yay! You brought back Elizabeth! I was starting to miss her. And about the slashy thing, it was great! I don't care what anyone says, a little bit of detail can go a long way. It's goo to be able to use an active imagination while reading. well it was really good and still pretty steamy despite it's length so, great job. Keep writing, you're doing great. [I know, how many time can I say great? Sorry 'bout that =) ] Well, good luck!
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  • From ANON - Adanhen on July 20, 2003
    Wow! I REALY love how this story is coming along! (er, *wince* no pun intended.. lol) Very original! ^_^ I love your charactorizations and the quirks. The humor is just adorable. I have a constant smile on my face when reading it and I enjoy that. ^_^ Will and Jack just fit so nicely together aye? lol Like I said I LOVE your portrail of Will and Jack, and I love (again no pun intended) how Jack keeps callin Wil "Luv", its how I always picure them so its just cute, and fits well. I admit Bootstrap isn't quite how I imagined him, but then again I kinda imagined him half dead, lol, but I like how he's coming out though. I can't wait to see what he's going to do about Jack 'corrupting' his sweet little William. ^____^ Anyway, Keep up the great work! I can't wait for more! ~ Adanhen (manchild)

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  • From ANON - D\'Artagnan on July 20, 2003
    Chp. 11: CASTRATED?! That is so evil! Deliciously evil! *cackles maniacally* I shouldn't laugh... but it's so bloody EVIL! Please update soon! I can't bear to wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Mel on July 20, 2003
    Mm, I love getting updates so fast! ^_^

    Another great acheivement with this chapter. Although, I'd have to agree, Bootstrap is too Norrington-y. ^_- Just don't give him a wig, and all will be well. ^_^

    Hm, too tired for anything more, though know you writing is still excellent as ever!

    ^_^
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  • From ANON - Pookie on July 20, 2003
    *tries to refrain from squealing and thanking you for updating so often*

    blah, screw it

    *squeals*
    thank you for updating so much!

    ok, now I'll try a real review (I'm not good at this, thus being why I read fics and don't write them)

    I like how you've portrayed Bootstrap, he may seem a bit too Norrington-y (as you put it) but I think if he wasn't, his... antaganism towards Jack and Wills relationship would be be quite as believable. Although I would rather Bootstrap support his sons decisions.. some parents... tsk tsk.

    Jack and Will are really cute together, and while I'm all for hot sex scenes, I like the way you're handling it. Makes us use our imaginations.

    Elizabeth and Norry back together, I suppose that's to be expected, though now I question her taste in men.

    what else.. oh! I love Anamarie, someone has to keep Jack in line, and she's perfect for it!

    nw, I have a question and I don't know if you can answer it... but why is Bootstrap's nickname Bootstrap?



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  • From ANON - Diane on July 19, 2003
    oOo...bad bad Bootstrap. We do not hold pistals to Jack's face. Right, so...definitely liking the story so far. And I'm very glad that you're posting it on AFF.net too because ff.net is being a piece of crap right now. Anyway...love where you're going with the story so far and I can't wait for the citrus! Not that that is the only thing vital to a fic, but yeah...you still gotta love itpefupefully this won't turn into a Bootstrap disowning Will because he's with Jack thing, well...no, that isn't neccesarily bad, it'll just turn the whole damn thing into one huge soap opera. Wow...a pirate soap opera, now that's something new. Anyway, my brain is fried and I can't really think of anything else to write. Sorry. Umm, anyway, can't wait for thet cht chapter(s)! Oh, and thanks men mentioning me in this chapter...I feel so special. *grin*
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  • From ANON - D\'Artagnan on July 19, 2003
    Chp. 10: How old is Jack supposed to be, ay? ay? I was guessing mid to late thirties. Bootstrap should die. I'm sorry if you like him, but he's just a nuisance. And wanting to kill Jack! That's sacrilege! Please update soon, this is extremely good.
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  • From ANON - D\'Artagnan on July 19, 2003
    Chp. 9: OK, Bootstrap must get lost right now. He's pissing me off so much. As a note, isn't "parley" supposed to be "parlez"? It is French, after all. This story is really great, I love the Will/Jack stuff, obviously, and I can't wait to read the next chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - D\'Artagnan on July 19, 2003
    Chp. 6: Aww! So cute! I hope Bootstrap doesn't ruin everything.
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