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Reviews for Coming Along

By : Aithilin
  • From ANON - Raz Gaiale on July 22, 2003
    I can't WAIT until Jack and Bootstrap meet up again......*that* should be interesting!

    This was another great chapter.....Keep up the good work! :)
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  • From ANON - Paige on July 22, 2003
    I like, write more ;) jk

    I love your writing style and I love way way you write Jack. As you said yourself, he's not an easy character (in my humble opinion, if any other actor played him, the movie wouldn't have worked quite as well) And wow, you're a fast bunny, not that it's bad or anyhting...all I know is that I can't get enough of the story.

    Oh and please pretty please...could I have a lurve scene? I'll bribe you with cookies ;)

    -Paige
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  • From ANON - Ash on July 22, 2003
    wonderful!!! love the pairing btw......hehehe definitly love this story!!! do continue....
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  • From ANON - Nita on July 22, 2003
    Whoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

    I get a Lolly shapped like the jolly ole Roger! -sucks her lolli-

    Yre sre so kind to me, mand I get to cull, maim, and perform Aztecian sacrifices with flamers! Youre the best.

    One lil comment on what you told me luv. If you think Will can keep Jack out of trouble you're forgetting something. He's Captain Spa Sparrow. His keeping out of trouble would be....it's....It's like imagining NOrrington as a pirate or a stripper. Not likely. -.- Those mental piccies were eeeeeeeeeeevil. -shivers-

    -sucks her lolly- This was short but I am impressed on how you manaaged to depict the Pearl's relationshiup with other pirates. At teh begining you can see the pure awe and the hint of fear in the eyes of the old pirates in the cell next to Jack at the mear mention of the l. l. YOu can't forget about those two silly old soldiers who argued whether or not the Pearl existed. Lovely. You managed tp incorperate that without making a mockery of neither pirates or the Pearl.

    Oh yes another thing. Bootstrap Bill subject again. You've made him not. You don't savvy so lemme rephrase than. You didn't make him like Jack. You didn't make him like Will. YOu didn't make hiom like Norrington. You made him William "Bootstrap Bill" Turner, his own person, with his own personality, and his own stick up his arse. -sucks lolli-

    You're the shibbiest, wickedest, most savvyest writer I know, savvy?

    Nita!

    P.S. -sucks lolli- More Parrot please.
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  • From ANON - Sil Silver on July 22, 2003
    There is only one way I can think of that could make Jake take the bounty on thier heads sereusly. And thats when somebody goes after Will.
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  • From ANON - For-Ch ³ on December 28, 1919
    Ooooh! I'm really enjoying this story. I had the same notion that Bootstrap might be alive out there somewhere, but really he must remove that stick from his bum. Poor Will is angsting over it and he and Jack can't be happy that way. I hope you don't have any horrible terrible disasters planned, though if you do I'll still read as this is one of the best Pirates fics I've read so far.

    Cheers!
    For-Chan
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  • From ANON - Datiye on July 22, 2003
    Uh oh. A price on their heads? Does that count foeryoeryone on the Black Pearl? Oh god I hope that they dont screw themselves with this. I would hate to see things turn out badly. Don't worry if the chapter was short, its still really good and suspenseful. Everyone gets writers block ( I've had it for a few months, I mean geez!). And thanks for the lolly! Much apreciated. Good luck!
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  • From ANON - Mel on July 22, 2003
    Another good one. Geez, I'm running out of things to say... I hate to leave one-liners...

    Ooh, ooh, two lines, now. ^_- Seriously though, nice characterization of all involved, I especially like Norrognton, he seems so... like him. ^^ And I agree, Elizabeth and Norrington do seem to have more chemistry. Anyhow, Jack was nice as well, liked the reward bit^_-

    Great again! ^_^
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  • From ANON - clonesofconfusion on July 21, 2003
    we like this story. We can soo see it happening. So a Will/Jack Shipper. I(and my evil sister) totally enjoy your writing style. keep the chapters coming, and we'll keep reading them!
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  • From ANON - Raz Gaiale on July 21, 2003
    I'm enjoying this story very much so far. I love how you make Jack change acing ing to who he's interacting with, the way he does in the movie. I especially love how you didn't reduce Elizabeth into the bitchy ex-girlfriend or shove her completely out of the picture. She IS a good character, and it says a lot for your ability to be able to incorporate her in a way that conributes to the story. The whole Booap/Jap/Jack conflict is great too, especially because it's put Will in such a nasty prediciment. I can't wait to see more of this story!!!! :)
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  • From ANON - Diane on July 21, 2003
    ~*Chapter 11*~

    Grrr....bad bad Bootstrap. How dare he go to *Norrington*?! Well, even with all that, I really liked this chapter. Plots are getting more complicated and all that and yeah, sorry for making this review short, but you posted chapter 12 also and I have to go read it now. No patience left in me right now!
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  • From ANON - Jane Silver on July 21, 2003
    Love seeing all the romance stuff going on between Jack and Will. If you do have the Black Pearl being taken by Will father, pleace don't make it easy for him. Also if this does go angst, then pleace let Jack and Will die together, I don't think eather one could live very long without the other.
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  • From ANON - Thursday on July 21, 2003
    this is my favorite story right now, and i really appreciate how quickly you update, i imagine itrobarobably not the easiest thing to do. i look forward to your next few chapters, and do you think you might be able to put a little bit of smut in there? i don't think you would have any problems writing it because you write so well! great story i really enjoy it.
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  • From ANON - Arabwel on July 21, 2003
    *needs to read what happened after the "knees bit Badly, I would... ... this IS good. I like this... :D
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  • From ANON - Tenshi on July 20, 2003
    I love your story! I'm eager to see what's going to happen next. Your story has a great twist and I can't wait for the confrontation between Jack and Will's father.

    Is Elizabeth going to have an important part in the story? I just think that, with a bit of manipulation on Bootstrap's part, it could make another interesting twist... but that's just me. I just think it could be interesting to see Will being torn and not knowing what to do...

    Anyway, great work! ^_^

    Just so you know, I love the Jack/Will fluff scenes you made. Hope there are more!!!
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