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By : Aithilin
  • From ANON - mc on July 23, 2003
    Lets ditch Ted Elliott and throw Aithilin into the writer's seat for the POTC sequel. ;) Now *there's* a movie. Aithilin, i love the characterization and the imagination in your plot. It's very well organized, presented..and hell, it just kicks ass.

    Damn those sexy pirates.
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  • From ANON - Raz Gaiale on July 23, 2003
    This was a nice look at everyday life on the Black Pearl. I'm very interested in hearing the story of how Jack * Bootstrap met, since Jack seems to have a certain trepidation about telling it. And of course I want to see what Jack's "lesson" to Anamaria & Will is. ;o) I liked how you made the chapter very peaceful, but with an undercurrent of threat from Bootstrap and tension between certain crew membe..Go..Good job, as always! :)


    Ps. I think Jack the Monkey should come back for a showdown with Cotton's parrot. I wonder which of them is the bigger pirate's-animal-sidekick badass......lol! ;oP
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  • From ANON - clonesofconfusion on July 23, 2003
    we can't wait to hear the tale of how jack and bootstrap met. sounds like fun, we think
    more, we plead for more Charlie and Bravo
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  • From ANON - Pookie on July 23, 2003
    weee!

    Will and Ana getting back at Jack for teaching the bird that song! what is the birds name? does anyone know?

    oh! and thank you for answering my question about Bootstraps nickname, Il ike your theory, better then anything I could come up with!

    what else... um um.. I had a question, but I forgot what it was *sigh*

    I liked when Elizabeth smacked Bootstrap, that was loverly...

    can't thinkanytanything else... um... yeah, that's it!

    oh! thank you for updating so much!
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  • From ANON - Caelestis on July 23, 2003
    *grins* Wow! What can I say! This is one of the best fics I have read! Hurry and update soon, the suspense is killing me!
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  • From ANON - Diane on July 23, 2003
    oOo..the suspense! Now, Boostrap wouldn't *really* put Will on trial, would he? Whatever happened to "Whatever makes you happy dear"? We need to send Anamaria down there to kick some puny stuck up butts. Yup, that oughta do it.

    I love the whole public displays of affection thing you got going on between Jack/Will and the rest of the crew. It's so great, because Jack would be the one that's all "if they say something, they're dead", while Will is the one that really cares about what everyone thinks and doesn't want to make anyone uncomfortable. And Anamaria's comment! Oh, that had me laughing. "I just want the crew to keep their food down" (or something like that...hee hee) So funny. Right, so, great job and I can't wait to see what you update tomorrow!
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  • From ANON - Ash on July 23, 2003
    ooooooo the cuteness the cuteeness!!!! ::cute spasm:: awwwwwwwwwwww Jack and WIlllllll are so cute together! more soon? ::holds out sugar;: i'll give you some sugar cubes...^_^
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  • From ANON - Amazon on July 23, 2003
    *waves* If I review in both places can I get two lollies? *teasing* But really. I do love this story, and want more, soon. I like the fact that you brought Bootstrap back, that was a cool twist on everything. *grin* I love the parrot. I want more of him too.
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  • From ANON - havoc on July 23, 2003
    Still liking this. Glad that you made the crew unshocked at Jack and Will. Very real. Curious to see what will happen with the reward floating around after them. I'd like to see more with Ana Marie-- she's a lot of fun. Any info you do talking about her past with Jack, seeing as she was the first to hear about Will, would be cool.
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  • From ANON - Datiye on July 23, 2003
    Yes! Elizabeth slapped Bootstrap! I just love that! And Anamaria continues to show her sass. I just love strong women characters. I hope to continue to see more of such. And thanks for wishing me luck on the writers block 'cause *tada* It's gone! My turn to give you lollies!
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  • From ANON - Mel on July 23, 2003
    More Gibbs! ^_^V I don't know why, but I just love him...

    I like how you write Elizabeth, seems fitting to her character. And Jack's a continued work of excellence. ^_^

    There interaction between Jack and Ana is great! Love it.

    ^_^V
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  • From ANON - Sara on July 23, 2003
    I really like this story. When I came on and saw it was updated I was excited. The way you write the characters is perfect and I love the fluff between Jack and Will. I also think that having Annamaria in the story I awesome, she was really cool in the movie and she's probably the only one who has the most guts out of the whole crew. Keep it up I can't wait till the next chapter! ^_^
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  • From ANON - FuziPenguin on July 23, 2003
    For all of the chapters so far: very nicely done. I think that you've hit Will's characterization spot on. In my opinion, I think Jack should be a just a bit more manic, but then again, it has been a year after the movie and things have settled down a bit for the Cap'n. I'd also like to see firsthand more of the things that caused Jack's reputation as a formidable pirate (ex: like killing the guy who threw the dagger at Will). Basically, I'd like to see the darker side of Jack explored. The lighter side, i.e., all the cuddles with Will (which are extremely cute, and in my opinion, agree with my view of Jack's personality) is well done.
    That's it from me. Basically, I really like the story so far, and can't wait to read the following chapters.
    ~FP
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  • From ANON - Sandrine Black on July 22, 2003
    I just love this fic. It was like the first one I ever read after seeing the movie. And it's still my fav! ^_^ I don't really have any suggestions for you, cause I really like how everythings going. Can't wait to see what happens next! And if any of the reviewers get you down at ff.net, have Jack (the monkey) attack them. I feel bad, because I spend most of my time at ff.net; I don't want others giving it a bad name! Just have fun writing this fic! Keep up the FANTASTIC work!!
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  • From ANON - Christine C on July 22, 2003
    You know, cute is not an adjective one usually applies to the likes of pirates, but in this case, ahem, "Awwww, Jack and Will are so *cute*!"

    Ok, that's over with. In specific regards to the story (so far, at least ~_^)

    1)Someone (I honestly forget who, just someone who wasn't me) once said that there are 2 types of people who write stories, these being
    "Writers" and "storytellers." I think you definately fall into the latter category (a good thing, in my opinion.) I am loving this story, mostly
    for the care taken in the details which bring the story to life. Good job there.

    2) Thank you for your attention to several writing tradis, is, including:
    a) paragraphs-- ah, how many times have I looked at a story only to find it a block of words without end. Sadly, these stories might be
    great, an I miss them because I immediately hit the "back button."

    b)Spelling -- More than closely resembles the English Language. In fact, is usually correct. What a pleasant change from some other authors.
    While I understand that English is hard enough for native speakers, and harder for those learning it later in life, one should always make sure they
    have the right word to avoid confusion. Thank you for not relying on SpellCheck to do your work for you.

    c) Grammar-- Even I suck at grammar, but thank you for having verb-subject agreement, and consistency of tense. Stories flow so much
    better when one isn't constantly tripping over the sentences.

    although you may not think these things very important, the fact is that by not noticing any problems with them, I am left free to
    enjoy your (excellent) story. And I thought I should express my appreciation.

    Other than that, the rest of my $0.02:
    Chapters end where they will. Long or short. I see no need for you to apologize. Of course we want more (we're greedy bastards),
    but I say better a good short chapter than a sucky long one. Kind of like a performance or visiting-- leave them wanting more, not
    stuck wanting out.

    Keep up the good work, don't forget to slip the ginseng into Jack's rum, and above all, keep having fun.

    ^_^

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