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By : Aithilin
  • From ANON - Datiye on July 27, 2003
    what a devious way for ana and will to get back at jack. behaving! who woula thought...
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  • From ANON - Jade on July 27, 2003
    hehehe, I luv your Jack, He is like the Jack-Jack,
    does that make sense? I would luv it if he used
    that sexy slur on everyone, of course he would
    have to use luv in every sentence...
    must get going!
    Jade
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  • From ANON - Pookie on July 27, 2003
    YAY! it's starting to get exciting!

    well.. it was exciting before, but now it's.. *sigh* y'all know what I mean.

    Bootstrap fustrates me, why can't he accept his sons decisions?! He is lucky he is a ficitonal character, otherwise I would slap him silly.

    now, what is Elizabeth up GoinGoina withhold the honeymoon til Norrington does what she wants? btw, what is Norrington's first name?

    "I'm not insane. That's how it seems though."

    I love that, I think I'll be using it in one of my many signatures *bg*

    more soon please!!
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  • From ANON - Nita on July 27, 2003
    Oh, this chappie was blissful! I lovedthat line, "J you you're a pirate"

    Hee hee hee! it had me giggling for ages! or ratehr not ages, but it made me forget my rage.

    One of my prophesy's appear to be a 'comming true so yay!

    Jack beign threatened is a site that amuses me.

    Jack is the one getting hurt this time, isn't he? Will's had his turn and Bill is still pissed at Jack and WIll is prolly going to do soemthing stupid. -sigh-

    I just hope they remember the Code: Rule 25. DOn't get caugth without ammunition.

    I hope Jack get's through this fic alright, after all, he is Captain Jack Sparrow and he has too many fangirls. Will could get hurt himself this time and it turns a bit silly with will being caught in the jail cell and Jack beign the one to tease Will about getting caugth and stuck there.

    More Parrot as always -sucks lolli-
    Nita!
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  • From ANON - Nita on July 27, 2003
    WHAT?!

    IM AT AN OUTRAGE! YOU HAVEN'T DECIDED YET?!
    You are supposed to be evil! To tease us with your knowledge of who will die! Not disappear after telling your favorrevireviwer you know not of whom to kill! I vote for Gibbs or Cotton. No matter what teh parrot lives. more will come after i read Chap 19.
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  • From ANON - Nita on July 26, 2003
    Darnede ofe of cousins and ficwriters. Me and Kat are writting 24/7 to type out all46 chapters of The Piraes Code so you'll see little from me

    I wish I could give you roses and pirates merchaindise so cyber roses and cyber tshirt will do instead. -sends-

    -hug-

    You give me pirates, you give me evil schemes, what more could a devoted fan want? You even gave me parrot. I hope the plot is going to take a fascinating turn, i really do. You have my full support all the way
    Exhaustausted,
    Nita!
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  • From ANON - D\'Artagnan on July 26, 2003
    Oh! Please update soon! And this IS one of the best PotC fics I've ever read, I kid you not. Don't be so hard on yourself. I like where this is going *grins* That Bootstrap is so evil.
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  • From ANON - Madoushi Clef on July 26, 2003
    Fluffy? That angst, the whole Bootstrap escapade, and... having to remember Norrington exsisted was fluffly? *gets her hamster and Sanji plushie* I'll need these.

    SHORT chapters, but I think they shouldda kept up their revenge a bit longer, just to drive Jack to the wall. ~_^ So he'd be all freaked out and paranoid, telling them, "Aye, aye! Got back ta normal!" Or maybe they should have written another song to teach the parrot....?

    Thank you for answering. *feels special* 'M not surprised that Bootstrap kept changing his ...'opinon' so as to keep alive. His last name says it all. (And William means 'protector', by the way.) The last chapter was a little choppy, but it needed those quick cuts to the important points of everyone's conversation (or thoughts), so it's alright, but it still feels choppy.

    Loved the, "Absolutely nothin, Jack." Will said, the very picture of innocence. Don't think he's the tyo roo roll his eyes though. Maybe a hard stare, and, "Do it, Jack." With the implication of it'll be more trouble than it's worth if he doesn't.

    'Tis off.

    Clef
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  • From ANON - Mel on July 26, 2003
    Found a new adjective to use -- glorious!

    So - The parts with Will and Ana are simply glorious. ^_^ Mmhm!

    As is everything else. I love it. Thank you for writing this!

    ^_^V
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  • From ANON - Sandrine Black on July 26, 2003
    Damn, another chapter so soon? I'm most definitely impressed! Poor Ana, birdy drove her mad. Hahha... I know I would be! No sleep in 2 days? Why ever not? Hopefully it's a good reason, not a one.one. Cause there are instances where no sleep is cause by something good, rather than bad. Like being up on the 'puter? ^_^

    I'm really hoping to go see the movie again tomorrow.. err.. that's now today I mean. I mean to see it tonight with some friends... I'm just hoping they don't back out on me. I already told her I would hunt her down if she didn't call me. I wonder if she knows I was serious about that.... ^_^

    Anywho, I'm definitely looking forward to more, but don't forget the whole sleeping thing! Hahaha... I'm also getting really excited about that AU your talking about. While I was waiting for new PotC fics to pop up (I have no life, what can I say.) I was really thinking about it, and it sounds so sweet!

    ... Leaving now, befo tal talk your ear off. Keep up the FANTASTIC work!!! (Sleep I say, sleep!)

    -Sandrine
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  • From ANON - Thursday on July 25, 2003
    hmmm... use my imagination i've got a pretty good imagination...*drool begins to shortout keyboard* hmm why that's a fine idea. great story can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Datiye on July 25, 2003
    Well then, I guess Jacks lesson worked rather well then. Yay for Jack and his excellent teaching skills! Oh, and about the slave ship plot idea, I would definatly read it if you wrote it. Definatly.
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  • From on July 25, 2003
    Good chapter. I think the slave ship idea is good. I like it.
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  • From ANON - Paige on July 25, 2003
    A 150 cookies coming right up ;) Thanks for that bit, lady, I needed that ;)
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  • From ANON - Mel on July 25, 2003
    Interesting way for Jack and Will Turner Sr. to meet! ^_^ Good job with that.

    And I like how you write Will... he's playful. ^_^

    Great!
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