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By : Aithilin
  • From ANON - Insane Pineapple from Naboo on July 29, 2003
    You know? Every time Will does somthing sd, id, it always comes out right. I guess it would just be taking risks than actually called stupidity, but it just wouldn't be right witout Captain Jack Sparrow behind him pointing it out. So it will always be studity that always comes out right. I wonder what Jack has in mind at the gallows. Or does he even get to the gallows. I love his slippery escapes. I loved how you had Elizabeth slapping Jack. He has th absolute worst luck with women (and the best with men...f thf thanaganage to get out of Port Royale alive (and I'm sure they will), Anamaria is goio mao maim Jack to the point where he's almost dead. Well, we was the one that purposely got them caught in the first place, so I wouldn't really blame her. I would find it very interesting if Elizabeth trying to help them escape in another way besides trying to convince the Commodore. I don't think the Comodore would budge on this. Poor Boots. We. We has to let go of his son. Wait!! Maybe Bootstrap was part of Jack's plan of escaping. With the mind of Captain Jack Sparrow, anything goes.

    Ja ne,
    ~Insane Pineapple from Naboo

    (P.S. Thanks for the lolly. I'll hand you a steaming cup of white chocalate mocha for whatever you needed that information for. A history paper maybe? *cringes* I really don't like history. Always glad to help. If you need anymore, I'll be around. Ins
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  • From ANON - Earen on July 29, 2003
    I keep forgetting there's a fic world outside of the mailing lists... hehehe
    Anyway! *flails arms* Don't stop there! When will Lizabeth learn of Jack's
    and Will's relationship????? What's going to happen next? What's Jack's
    plan?????????? *collapses* btw, thanks for signing me guestbook ^.~

    Earen
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  • From ANON - Datiye on July 29, 2003
    Ooh, holding out on the honeymoon sex. How evil is that? I think very. My fiancee wouldbe so pissed off if I did that ( reason why I can't drink much on my wedding day =( ). Hope that doesn't piss him off too much.
    Now, what could Jack possibly have planned? You really love to stup your readers, don't you? Well, sus! Ys! You certainly have done it 'cause I have no clue how they can get out of this one. So, is Will going to tell Elizabeth a Jac Jack and himself? I just have to wonder what her reaction would be to that kind of news. Not that I think she would take it badly, it just may be interesting to see. Just keep that in mind, please. Well, good luck and keep writing!
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  • From on July 29, 2003
    Yay, chapter 21 baby! And I do like the longer factor of it. And seriously, what's going on in Jacks beautiful head? Can't wait to find out what this plan is that he speaks of. Really glad to hear that you've almost figured out the AU. Do we have a slight countdown of the days to the first chapter? Or is that still a lil' premature? Either way, I'm exciterated. Yeah, thats a word... ^_^ I totally agree with ice cream being good! And my mom was like, you need to finish this today. So I had a good reason to have another serving later on. Hehehe... Oh yeah, you should sleep, and now eat more. Gotta keep yourself kickin!

    Anywho, looking forward to more of your fics! Keep up the FANTASTIC work!!!
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  • From ANON - Mel on July 29, 2003
    Hm... how's marvelous for a new adjective? It works. ^_^V

    And more Gibbs! ^_^ Yay!

    And as for Changi Singapore... I'd try the normal places, encyclopedia.com and the like. The quick search through Google came up with mostly recent stuff (1950's)... Hope you find what you're looking for!


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  • From on July 28, 2003
    I liked Elizabeth a lot in this chapter. Good chapter.
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  • From ANON - Thursday on July 28, 2003
    this is such a spiffy story smut isn't even neccessary! excellent job, i really can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From on July 28, 2003
    I like how manipulative Elizabeth is, it's not like she had any choice in marrying Norrington, she might as well make the best of it. *g*

    "Not now dear, I'm worried about my friends having a bounty upon their heads."
    "Well, to hell with law and politics and respectibility, I've been hard up since your father stopped paying me 'visits' once we became engaged. They're free to go, now drop those bloomers."

    *cough* I just had to get that out there...I swear Norrington and the Govenor are probably closer in age, anyway and Swan is such an effeminate wuss. LOL

    Still loving the story BTW.

    =^.~= Aly

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  • From on July 28, 2003
    Yay, new chapter! Can't wait to see if there's any trouble when there in the town/village. Hopefully there will be! ^_~ Anywho, I need to go eat the breakfast of champions.... ICE CREAM! Hehhe. Can't wait for more of this awesome fic, keep up the FANTASTIC work!!!
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  • From ANON - Insane Pineapple from Naboo on July 28, 2003
    I thought I'd help ya out, just to be nice. http://au.geocities.com/digger_history_ww2/ http://www.abc.net.au/changi/history/default.htm
    Email me if you need anymore. I like the way that you're showing Anamaria's doubt in Jack's plans, but at the same time showing how loyal and trusting she is to Jack. I wonder what will happen when Elizabeth meets with Jack and Will. "It would have never worked between us, Darling." *grins*

    Ja ne,
    ~Insane Pineapple from Naboo
    P.S. I hope I was helpful for once....
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  • From ANON - Jade on July 28, 2003
    Next chappie gunna be longer? Elizabeth,
    hehehe... thats just too smart... is she still
    in luv w/ will? hope not. So, is this fic gunna
    be real long? I just wanna know so i can prepare
    myself!
    Well,
    must be going!
    Jade
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  • From ANON - Nita on July 28, 2003
    -sigh-

    I'm not going to hurt you. I'm normally an angst writer so I would be the first to congratulate you if you killed off one of the boys.

    Yes, this was verort.ort. Far too short for my liking.

    Longer review later since theres not much to cheer right now.

    -gives Talking Dolly Jack and Talking Dolly Will-

    Cheers!
    Nita!
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  • From Malthenel on July 28, 2003
    Wow. I love this story! I hope they both live through it. I also hope that Bill and his son get along better and come to some kinda understanding. I love how this story is written. Nice clean concise chapters. Not to long or rambling, like yours truly. But perfect. They grab your intrest and hold it and keep you hanging on for the next installment. I added this fic to my recs for easy acess lmao. Hope you don't mind! One day I hope to as good a writer as you are. :) Can't wait for the update!!! Keep it coming and i'll keep reading. Not to mention Orli and Johnny are hot, hot, hot, hot in this movie! I love picturing them as you describe them in your fic! All cuddly and comfortable....*sighs* Nice......*goes back to re read and imagining.* Update soon please?
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  • From ANON - Sandrine Black on July 27, 2003
    Yay new chapter! I would have reviewed sooner, but I was out... seeing the movie again!!!!! ^_^ YAY! Yeah, that was good times... Anywho! Good chapter. Wondering what's gunna happen in Port Royal, can't wait to see. Let's say it all together: "Sleep is good. Sleep is our friend. Slee is FUN!" ^_^ Oh yeah, I also sit pretty much all day and go between refreshing and reading from three diff sites. A yahoo one that has like 800 members, lot of good fics there! Fanfic.net, and then here. ... That might mean I have no life, but I'm enjoying it still! hehehe. I would also help ya bounce off ideas for that new AU fic, but I don't want to turn into a yes man, er..woman.., like I'm afraid I might just cause I'm so excited about it. Also, I like to not take part in fics, cause then everyth suc such a surprise for you! I'm a avid reader, no writing is done by me!

    Looking forward to more work done by you!
    Sandrine ^_^
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  • From ANON - Mel on July 27, 2003
    ^_^ Repeat of last review's adjective, because really, "glorious" goes a ways, don't you think?

    Glorious!

    ^_^ Very likable Elizabeth -- great job with that! I've noticed most author's tend to make her evil incarnate...

    Hmm... Waiting for more! ^_^V
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