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By : Aithilin
  • From ANON - SanelyChallenged on July 30, 2003
    YA! I'm lovin' this. Do more soon please
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  • From ANON - Sanomi on July 30, 2003
    This has got to be one of the best PotC fanfics I've ever read! The characters are in character (or as much as they can be in a fic) and I really enjoy your writing style. I hope you put up the next chapter soon, I can't wait to see what Jack's got up his sleeve!
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  • From ANON - Datiye on July 30, 2003
    Yay! i knew that Elizabeth would be supportive. Thats just her style. Oh and Gah! How couack ack make that kind of a deal! I dont want Jack to die. I love Jack! He can't die! He just can't! Please dont kill the man I dream of every night!
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  • From ANON - ShadowSpirit on July 30, 2003
    Man o.O You're quick at updating. ::Prods Bootstraps character.:: Least he's getting better....finally seems to understand the two....goodie ^^ ::Can't wait to read more.:: I think you should make a sequel after this *nods* that you should.
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  • From ANON - Earen on July 30, 2003
    I'd ne'er forget you, luv. :) What lovely chapters. I'm also said that this be cloo eno ending.
    I can't wait to see what Jack has up his sleeve, as it were. Ah! Simply lovely.
    Btw, an offer, if you will: I'd love to archive this story at Savvy :)
    http://evolutionsX.net/savvy/ :)

    Earen
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  • From ANON - soho on July 30, 2003
    This isn't sadistic.... this is *torture*!!! MORE!! NOW DANGIT! lol...GAH! I absolutely adore this, and it is beautifully written, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - ShadowSpirit on July 29, 2003
    *Sniffles* It's almost over...? But it can't beeee *Whines* Though....*Perks up* I love how Jack stood up to Bootstraps ^^ Protecting his Will.....and a Jack-like plan? Yes....must love his plans....::Dances happily.:: I hope everyone hears him out ^^ ::Gives a weary look anyway.::
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  • From ANON - Madoushi Clef on July 29, 2003
    ...? *wonders what the angst warning had been about* Have we gotten to that yet? When I see angst, I think, 'who's dying?!? Oh Gods, don't kill off Jack or Will!'

    o exo expected Elizabeth to smack Norrington for dismissing her and talking to Bootstrap. I would have. I can't believe she's going to marry that... *beep* I love her asking Ana to take care of them. Have I told you how much I love your Elizabeth? Maybe she's really a red-head.

    Like that Will stands up to Jack more. Thankies. Like...noat wat was the other slash fic... (they're all starting to run together now.) I like that Ana didn't kill the bird.

    You know, the phrase 'hiding in plain sight' actually involves inging' right? It'd have been a tad more useful to commondere some uniforms or different clothing to actually hide, savvy?

    Well, Jack's got them quite in a pickle. He's not gonna turn priveteer is he? *hopes not* It'd be a terrible reputation for the Pearl....hm. *bad thought* A pirate without a ship's not much of a pirate. No, no, don't trade the pearl away! Please? They'll never get the stench of norrington out...

    I have a title for ye. This fic reminds me of the phrase, "Cat and Mouse", since it resembles a chase back and forth between everyone. Anywho, can't wait for the next update. You write damn fast. *beams* Thanks!

    Clef
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  • From ANON - Raz Gaiale on July 29, 2003
    You're twisted and sadistic. You truly are. Making me wait to find out Jack's plan....*twitches* ;)

    You're also a good writer. I'm sincerely enjoying where this story is going. I can't wait to see what Bootstrap is going to do in response to Will's impending execution, what Jack's secret meeting is all about, and whether or not Norrington is going to end up breaking down and crying like a little girl when Jack & Will slip through his fingers once again. (Because they have to, right? RIGHT?) Yes, I know I'm neurotic. It's late and I'm out of coffee....NEVER a good mixture! :)

    And being a good writer doesn't mean you're not twisted and sadistic. 'Cause you are. :)
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  • From ANON - Christine C on July 29, 2003
    This just gets better and better. . .

    It's pretty rare that a cliffhanger actually gets me twitching with anticipation, but you have done it.
    I've got to spend the day at the hospital tomorrow, and I know that the whole time I'll be working it over in my head:
    "Now, just what is Jack up to?"

    h* Ih* I guess I'll just have to wait and see, ne?

    What a pain in the ass. . . ~_^!

    Love it!

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  • From ANON - Nita on July 29, 2003
    I think maybe you don't blieve the violence bit 'cause I get in brawls, have bullet scars, and threatened to shoot some one over the internet for speaking to you and am currently threatening someone who irritates you and flaming said person as well for Lollipops. -sucks lollis-

    If you don't believe me on the angst thing and the congratulations bit, go to http://inkstain.slashcity.net and look for the fics titled Abused and Afterwards. They are but small master pieces that are the reason I have groupies -giggles-

    Imagine, me with groupies?! -sucks lolli-

    Hmm, I wonder what's going through Jacks mind right now! He better have soemthing good planed. and yay ELizabeth for getting to slap Jack! BNow if only Anamaria slaps Jack, then Will, and the Gibbs it'll be orgasmic! i like the improper use of Orgasmic. it makes people stutter and blush.

    Hmmm, what's ol' Bootstrap gonna do and how will Elizabeth get them out of them?

    Oh dear, for a moment there, i forget Jackie was Captain Jack Sparrow.

    Do you like your new Jack Dollie? If you take the tiny flask out of his pocket he says, "Why the rum?!" and he comes with Sword Fight Cheating Action!

    Erm, Norringtons an ass who needs a good shag. Or maybe someone to take the damn stick out of his ass and Mr. Swan is still pompous.

    -hugs-
    Nita
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  • From ANON - Beth on July 29, 2003
    I really liked this part. jack must have something very devious up his sleeve, to go that easily with the Bootstrap and the British. Very very interested to find out what it is =)
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  • From ANON - ShadowSpirit on July 29, 2003
    Mannn....*Groans* What /does/ Jack have in mind? *Twitches* Good chapter though ^^ Update again soon ^^ ::Will be watching.::
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  • From ANON - Raz Gaiale on July 29, 2003
    Another great chapter. You seriously have to hurry up and update this story, because I really REALLY want to know what Jack's plan is. Knowing him, I'm sure it will be something that will leave everyone's mouths hanging open. ;) I like the fact that you're incorporating characters other than just the usual, like Gillette and the Pearl's crew. I also like the Jack/Bootstrap interaction, that yountaintain the whole past-connection thing instead of turning it into a one-dimensional hate relationship. Wow, this is kinda long. Sorry! :)~ Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Jade on July 29, 2003
    Ok, wonder what Jacks plan is... hmmm, well...
    THANX 4 UPDATING SOON!!!! I luv this story &
    hope the others you will right are as great as this one...
    Bye~
    Jade
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