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Reviews for Coming Along

By : Aithilin
  • From ANON - miranda on July 16, 2003
    nice story, I really like it, it has an excelent plot so far. I can't wait for more, please keep writing.
    I hope this becomes slash soon, then it would not only have a neat plot and some superb writing, but some excellent slash as well. (I'm just asuming that you write everything well.)
    please please please inueinue soon.
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  • From ANON - Nita on July 16, 2003
    Now that I read what other people have said about your lovely fiction, I just wanted to mention something my best friend said to me while watching the movie with me, "He's so gay. The way he walks, the eyeliner, the low voice, the way he keeps himself a hell of a lot cleaner than some of the other pirates, the hat, the need to have perfect clothes, the self-denial he causes himself by chasing women and prostitutes. That man is so deep in the closet it's sad. This is the only time I will ever wish I was a man."

    Just thought you'd find that amusing.

    Neets
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  • From ANON - Nita on July 16, 2003
    Wheeeee! You gave me my very own chappie! I luff you! -double hugs-

    This, was a work of brilliance, and I'm holding you to your Parrot promise, maybe you can even get it to sing "A pirates Life for me" I love that song. I know chunks of it. And people said I was a dork for seeing Pirates so many times. Im still a dork but, hey, it's got Pirates! I know what you mean about Buffy... I hmanymany hidden fics that will never see the day, including a Darla/Giles romance. I wish I could say I wrote it under the effects of rum but saddly....

    I loved the bit with the Pendulum, I always thought that it would make sense seeing as the Pearl was the worst threat in the Caribean, something would be the worst threat in the colonies and the Pendulum takes that cake. Europes worst is obvious, the Steel Heart.

    I hope that they do end up in a battle and either Jack or Will get hurt, and the other gets all upset. Seeing Will is the least experienced of the two and Jack managed to get through out Pirates completly without getting a scratch on him, drunk, knocked unconcious, handcuffed, and nearly hanged but nut physically hurt otherwise, I'd say it would be will. Oh, don't tell me if it happens though, surprises are lovely.

    Puns are good, puns are very good. Scenes where Jack gets his ego deflated are better. You are just s incharacter it's astounding., like Jack's line "There were sides?" is so purely Jack.

    Will's inquisitive personality and his determination are just placed so beutifully in the plot, it's gorgeous. I can barely wait untill the next chapter!

    Your loyal fan,
    Nita
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  • From ANON - datiye on July 16, 2003
    hey, i think this fic is actually going really well so please keep on writing. and dont worry about future lemons. a story can be just as powerful when you leave certain things behind closed doors. all you really need to do is strongly imply or outright say what is going on behind them. no need for detail (although it is nice when it is given). i think that you seem to be moving in the right direction. oh, and about jack's walk, i can only described it as a permenently drunken swagger or stroll (depending on his mood at the time). thats the best i can do with that one. maybe someone else has a better suggestion. anyway, i wish you luck on this and i hope that you will choose to update soon.
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  • From ANON - melodie on July 15, 2003
    that was amazing. can't wait for the rest.

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  • From ANON - Arabwel on July 15, 2003
    I like this... I like this a lot. Okay, so I have yet to see the movie, but what can I say? I often read fic before getting to know the real thing. :D Now, I'd definitely like to tell you that this is excellent. Are you, by any chance, that Aithilin who wrote the excellent Sauron/Legolas fic? If so, I hope this will be half as good, making this incredible. :)
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  • From on July 15, 2003
    Good chapter. I like the way you are working on Will's and Jack's relationship.
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  • From ANON - Vuaryn on July 14, 2003
    Love it......that was nice. Good job for being so detailed with the type of ships and merchants.thinthink you got the spelling right. Keep it up and I hope you will have your second chance at the movie soon.
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  • From on July 14, 2003
    Good story.
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  • From ANON - Nita on July 14, 2003
    It's wonderful to have someone who can write this fanfiction so well. You must be experienced in other fandoms. It was a pleasure to read your fiction because saddly, half the fics in this section are quite bad or out of character. You are doing quite well and you have the characters perfected. Will would seem the type to grow closer to Anamawho who certainly isn't afraid to hit her captain hard and rapeatedly and he did seem to become friends with Mr. Gibbs. Now, it is amazing that you would include historical facts and the like. If you have any questions of the movie or any quotes from the movie just ask me. I am not ashamed to admit I have seen it once every day since its been out. I had to stop today though from lack of money. God I wish I had Jack's riches. Well, ahyways, this email aint about me. It's about you. YOu are an amazing author and certainly seem to know your facts about pirates. I make but one request, could you put in a pun with the parrot in it? I really like that Parrot, dunno why. Oh wait, yes i do, he did his business on a red coat. go Parrot! -hugs-! Don't stop writting, I'll be waiting faithfully for the next chapter.
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  • From on July 14, 2003
    Nice! I likey! Personally, I don't see Bootstrap as a kind man, walking out on his kid son, but very good!
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  • From ANON - Cassandra on July 14, 2003
    I was thrilled to find a third chapter up. I'm also thrilled that your gonna bulid up a plot (with angst no less), and not just do random sex scenes. Can't wait.
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  • From ANON - Vuaryn on July 13, 2003
    Another g cha chapter. Although I too have theories of the possibilities that Will's dad is dead. Anyway, it's all theories. You have a good time writing and I am enjoying reading your version so far.
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  • From ANON - Meia noite on July 13, 2003
    I like this story, it's really good. i can't remember any of the crew except Cotton, the one that has the parrot, i really didn't pay much attention to anyone but Orlando. *grin*
    ~Meia~
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  • From ANON - Cassandra on July 13, 2003
    I like the premise of the story. I like the fact that there are already stories out. I am also a rabid slash fan, so. If people haven't already told you, I can give you some of the names of Jack's crew. The woman is Anamaria, Gibbs is the guy Jack spoke with in the tavern, and Cotton is the man without a tongue, who trained his parrot to talk for him. I think that's all the crew who had names. Please keep going with your story.
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