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By : Aithilin
  • From ANON - D\'Artagnan on July 19, 2003
    Chp. 5: YOU ARE A GOOD WRITER! This story is so good!
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  • From ANON - SanelyChallenged on July 19, 2003
    SQUEE!! Love this chapter and i cant wait for another one.
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  • From ANON - Nita on July 19, 2003
    yay! You threatened Jack! Ofcourse, my depest regrets to Jack but I find it amusing that you kept himcalm in such a sittuation, just like Jack.

    Sorry, Im onsomeoine elseskeyboard and it'seviland suchyso this wont bea s long as I wished it to.

    This wasn'tmy favo cha chapter either but you did go through with it excellently. WillandBootstrap were terribly awkward and you can practically see the tension with tyhe two of them when he's threatening Jack. I wonder where Anamaria was during all this.

    I loved the way you left that door open so that, if the time comes, there might or will be a confrontation/fight between the pendulum and the pearl and it will go down to Will and Bootstrap. With Jack making not entirely helpful comments some whereon the sideleines before getting bored or loosing his tenper aand stopping the two.

    Prophesy no. 3

    I don't like that idea much, but you left that door there. So it's cool.

    I wonder what will Elizabeth do when she finds out her ex is hooking up with Captain Jack Sparrow. Gods, I hope she slaps him. The expression on Jacks face each time he gets slapped is priceless.

    I find Mr. Swan pompous. Nice but a real hardass in a way. You made Bootstrap his opwn person, sthe way you have him, it's that,near the end, he becomes something more than just Will father,he becomes the true Bootstrap Bill.

    Nix....-pulls out a shot gun-

    When I call shot gun I mean it, don't tryn to go for my position or your going to be cyber shot in the ass.

    Sorry you had to see that

    -huggles-

    Tillthe next oddreview and terribly sorry for the mistakes, again, I blame the bad keyboard

    Nita!
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  • From ANON - Mel on July 19, 2003
    That'll do, Pig. That'll do.

    Babe, the Gallant Pig reference, by the by. Not calling you a pig... ^_^

    You amaze me with how fast you get this out! Bravo with that, alone. My only qualm (I like that word, qualm, makes me sound smarter than I am, eh? ^_-) with this chapter is the abrupt way Bootstrap up and leaves. Though again, he's your own to make, really, so however you want him to act.

    Did like the lines about age and whatnot, thought that was very... Jack-esque. (For lack of adjectivies. It's gotten early again ^_^') And the beginning was cute in a non-mush way. ^_^ Abhor the mush...

    Though, really, I don't have any complaints about this chapter. Edit it or no; I think it's good as is. ^_^

    But, if you wanted to say... make it longer, I wouldn't mind! ^_- I can't get enough of this story, love it to peices.

    Hm, it's early again. There go my coherent thoughts. I'll be shutting up.

    Good job!
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  • From ANON - Soho\'sHo on July 19, 2003
    Wonderful! absolutely wonderful!
    Can *not* wait for more! keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Arabwel on July 19, 2003
    Nice... I like this. That confriontation was a bit abrupt in my opinion, I think that if you do edit you might want to stretch it out a little.... but otherwise, I like. I like this a lot. :D
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  • From on July 19, 2003
    Good chapter. Bootstrap was pissed. At least Will and Jack didn't crumble under the pressure. I hope there is a sequel to PotC.
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  • From ANON - datiye on July 19, 2003
    wow, you really did mean a few minutes. impressive. yay, jack isnt castratbut but will is sad... you have to make him feel better! i dont know how but thats why you are the cool author and i just read! he he. well, definately a good job with the major conflict. but what will go wrong next, i wonder....
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  • From on July 19, 2003
    *Gasp* No hot, sweat, monkey luvin? Where's the smuty sex? This is AdultFanFiction ya know!

    Just teasing. I did like this chapter, though maybe when you edit later you'll add in some hot slash? (As in sex, not sword play. Erm...never mind.) Please, please!!

    And I would have expected Bootstrap to have barged in the moment he heard or saw Jack fooling around with Will. I know, I know I'm full of way to many questions and/or opinions. You see what happens when I really like a fic? You've got me hooked.

    BTW I'm finally going to get to see POTC again tomorrow. *Jumps up and down* Yes!!
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  • From ANON - datiye on July 19, 2003
    ack! please say it wasnt bootstrap who saw. I dont want jack to be castrated. i like jacks parts right where there are! anyway, once again you have managed to come up with a most amazing cliffhanger. i will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter and praying for jacks um... parts. ^ ^
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  • From ANON - Taills on July 19, 2003
    I have to say, this is fantastic! The characters are dead on, and I love what how you are creating Bootstrap. The romance is so, just, WOW! Even your grammer and spelling are imaculate. Please write more of this as soon as you can. If the other readers are anything like me, you have a huge crowd of people on the edge of their seats waiting for the next bit. You are an artist!! Just make sure you keep including cute moments between Jack and Will, and I will do your bidding. =^.^=
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  • From ANON - Meia on July 19, 2003
    wow! I can't wait for the next chapter, i really want to see what happens. I love the way you portray each character's personality, even to give bootstrap a small nervousit. it. i really like the way you've written his character.
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  • From on July 18, 2003
    I bet Bootstrap was outside the room. He is probably still trying to take Will away. Good chapter.
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  • From ANON - Earen on July 18, 2003
    Oh! I liked that last bit! YUMMY! *cackles* More? Soon?

    Earen
    Official PotC Keepers List : http://pirates.sinfree.net
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  • From ANON - Hippy Flower on July 18, 2003
    'Tis a savvy story I be tellin ye.

    lol I can't wait for more I really hope you'll post more asap. I want to know Bill's reaction. *snickers*
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