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Reviews for Stormy Waters

By : NoTears

From on July 21, 2003
Ch 3 was good. I'm glad that the Will/Jack relationship will be one of love.
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From ANON - BeckySteele on July 21, 2003
May I justsay you are very evl?
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From ANON - Leah on July 21, 2003
Great story!!!! I was so excited when I saw it was updated, and was not disappointed. You are a wonderful writer, I can just see all of the scenes playing out in my head. I like the 'Will in Trouble plot'. I mean, how can Jack comfort him if he hasn't suffered? I can't wait to read whatever you have coming up in the next chapters. Keep up the great work!!!

Leah
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From ANON - Hippy Flower on July 21, 2003
*takes in a huge gulp of air to say everything i one breath* OMGODDES!! I loved it! I hope you'll get to some Jack/will angst soon! How long are we going to wait!!! The wait will KILL ME
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From ANON - Melanie on July 21, 2003
YAY!!! *does booty dance* You just made my cloudy Monday morning a bright sunny day!!! Thank ye!! ;) I liked this chapter, too. I am eagerly wondering what ill fate will befall Jack now, since he 'lied' to the Commodore. Good stuff... as always I love the way you pace the story. It flows so easily. :) It's funny, but I feel like I am reading the deleted scenes from the movie. The stuff that happened in between... very nifty, I must say. ;) *laughs*

The floppy disk was the problem?? Ouch... :( I hate when that happens... b/c I had something similiar happen to me with a very big file. Like the floppy disk wouldn't bring up the file... it would take FOREVER. I was really worried, but I came to work and the floppy disk worked. Hmmm... strange. Anyways... thanks soo sooooo sooo moo much for liking my stories. :) It's really great to know that someone is reading those two stories. *laughs*

Thanks again and I can't wait for more on this wonderful story!!!! :)
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From Rommie on July 21, 2003
Another amazing chapter. I'm greatly injoying this, so please update soon. I worship Angst fic's, as well as write them.... But I'm still at fanfic net at present. Have to start moving over here..... *Bring on the rum induced dreams*

Rommie
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From ANON - Mithril on July 21, 2003
Wonderful! I really liked the way you showed Anamaria's point of view when Will was returned. It was a good decision. I really like her character, however small in the movie, and I'm glad you are giving her a bit of your time. When I got to the part with Elizabeth and Jack, I was crushed to learn that Will's dreadful bargain was now a one-sided profit for Barbossa. And Elizabeth doesn't even love him! Ah well, all the more angst and turmoil.. yay. I also liked Jack's intro here, even though he wasn't the focus really, I can't wait to see what plans you have for him later in the story. As for having to wait a bit longer for the other characters to learn the worst part of Will's deal, I will gladly wait! I would hate to see this story be rushed through. You are weaving a very interesting and perplexing tale. This is one of the best 'pirates' stories I have come by thus far. Bravo
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From ANON - Celesta Hellewise Harman on July 21, 2003
LOL! *mock glares at computer.* Yeah! Stupid computer! *laughs again then starts drooling* pain.... next chapter.... *gurgles like homer* Is very good! Screaming inlater chapters is goodgood too. Muuuuccccchhhhhh goodgoooooooddddssss!!! You really must hurry with the next chapter ne?! Is sheer torture waiting for it to come out now! Especially since you gave me that juicy little tidbit there. You know though... I do have a few male friends that write and love yaoi/slash it's a very good thing. They're not that bad looking either. And only ONE of SIX is not strait! *lmao* I think that's great! Well, yes, once e-mail is up and going, I'd love to talk with you, but for now, this is spiffy to. Well, have fun writting the next chapter! Oh! And never be afriad to do lots of stuff with blood or public displays! So many of my friends are squeemish of that sort of thing. Well, I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter! Do hurry ne?! I may be going out of line by asking this, but do you think you could do something a little special if you have time? Perhaps as a birthday thing? My birthday is on the 1st of august. You know what.... never mind. That is too bold isn't it? Well, Nan annan lle ar im govad ad. Namaarie. ((Ah, elvish... I love being fluent... it means, "Until we meet again. Farewell.))

~Celesta Hellewise Harman
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From Rommie on July 20, 2003
After reading your first two chapters’ I have found myself drawn into your fictional world. This fic is amazing, and so is its originality. The pairing's made me stumble at first, however after reading the banta between Will and Barbossa, and the hatred Turner feels towards him, I’m pretty certain on the motives behind the pairing... (Will’s love for Elizabeth) But then again, the pairing of Will and Jack... I love them together... Is this a true pairing, a reaove ove you’ relationship...? Or will the Turner/Barbossa become a true loving relationship. So many questions,’ which you’ve probably already answered. *Giggling on the after effects of Jacks Rum*

Please update soon...

Rommie

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From ANON - Adanhen on July 20, 2003
I REALLY like this story so far. I know the pariring is odd but it works. In a non-con kind of way of course. I have to admit watching the movie this idea (or something along the lines of it) also popped into my head. I mean with all the YUMMY Will gagging, and Will chaining and Will caging and the bending him over the box bit roowrll *licks lips* and that one pirate guy who kept caressing him and nuzzlin him when the chik was walkin the plank, I mean come on!! lol. (And I CAN'T be the only person who saw that either!) ANYWAY! lol, what I'm trying to say is this story is coming out wonderful! I love the idea and the charactorizations are great. I can't wait to see 'more' *wink wink, nudge nudge* if you get my meanin'. hehe ^_^ And I'm curious as to how your gonna get Jack into all this. Great story so far and I can't wait to see what your gonna do that sexy little thing next! ^_______________^ Keep up the great work! Ta!
~~ Adanhen (Manchild)
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From ANON - Sylvaine Elena on July 20, 2003
I just wanted to leave a little message saying that i love it and can't wait for you to put up more. It's getting really interesting

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From ANON - D\'Artagnan on July 19, 2003
Chp. 2: Please update soon, this is so good!
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From ANON - Hippy Flower on July 17, 2003
I LOVE IT!! CAN I BRIBE YOU TO POST MORE SOOOOOON!
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From ANON - Amy on July 17, 2003
how could you leave it there I mean come on I am dieing to know what you are going to do. You have to update quickly. Any way I am going to stop sounding desperate here. If you aren't busy could you email me when you update cause I want to be sure I don't miss it
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From ANON - Celesta Hellewise Harman on July 16, 2003
LOL! I know what you mean! I was grinning the rest of the day just for that as well. FINALLY!!! Someone who enjoys non-con as much as I do! Not to mention who is a VERY talented writter! It's always good when hot guys... like Will... scream. *sighs dreamily* Anyway! Once again an excelent chapter! I like that added part of being the crews cabin boy as well. OOoooooo!!! It just makes my thoughts full of creamy goodness!!!! You know.... you are an evil, evil woman/man (though I have a feeling it's woman) for keeping me waiting that long to read this part! I've been checking back every day.... and now... you've done it again!!!! I can't wait till it gets to the really, REALLY good stufffferffering and agony is always a pleasure. I like your writing style really. It's such that it pulls you in and makes you foregt your surrounding for a time. For some C&C... you might think about being a little more descrie ofe of the characters and the physicalities of it. The descriptions of the situations are WONDERFUL though. Honestly, I truly can't complain, even about the physicalities. I'd like to actually talk to you sometime, off the board. Drop me an e-mail if you're interested. As a fellow non-con, lover, i'd like to bounce some ideas off of you... if you're willing. You definitely have my admiration and my continued support and attention. Keep up the good work ne?! Oh... and do hurry with the next chapter ne? It truly is agony in the worst way, waiting so long for the next chapter to come out.
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