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By : NoTears

From ANON - Syne Ene Elena on August 09, 2003
OMG! I absolutely love this story! You are doing such a good job, and I can't wait to see what happens between Will and Barbossa! This is my fave on AFF.net so keep writing!
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From ANON - Rommie on August 08, 2003
Another wonderful chapter. The tention is beginning to drive me half insane, especialy that lovely cliffhanger. I can imagin the next chapter is going to be quite colourful. love the interation bewteen the other characters. looking frd trd to your next part, and hope both you and your friend are doing well.
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From ANON - Sandrine Black on August 08, 2003
YAY! *does happy dance* I'm so glad this chapter is out. I just /LOVE/ this fic. That was really funny, the whole Jack soup thingy. Much funnyness. That was so sad that Will passed out there at the end! I was like, 'Oh sad!' Definitely looking forward to the next chapter, after that hint you gave us. Will gets his first taste as a consort... dun dun DUN! *grins* Can't wait to read that! And I agree, while I may be sick, a lot of people are! And I love how long your stories are, makes ml hal happy to hear that usually they get longer as the fic progresses. Nothing better than long chapters I tell ya. Anywho, as I've said several times, I sooo can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the /FANTASTIC/ work!!!!!!
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From ANON - kazren on August 08, 2003
Oh, it's so exciting. The year of the story is some time just before 1692. How do I know? http://nautarch.tamu.edu/portroyal/

Read the history of Port Royal there. It was devastated by an earthquake - to quote: On the morning of June 7th, 1692, a massive earthquake hit Jamaica. The tremors rocked the sandy peninsula on which the town was built, causing buildings to slide and disappear beneath the sea. An estimated 2000 Port Royalists were killed immediately in the disaster. Many more perished from injuries and disease in the following days.

I was doing research for my own fan fic!

Love your story. I'm still praying for your friend's father. Hopefully they got it all and he will recover fully.
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From ANON - JamieRoberts on August 07, 2003
Very nice I can't wait for the next chapter.

Jamie Roberts
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From ANON - Smiigel on August 07, 2003
Hey, one can never tell what a story's going to be like from a summary (reading your notes on this chapter, ^.~). I know that I personally suck at them! But regardless, this story's really good, in my humble little opinion. Now, I'm a big slash fan, don't get me wrong, but a lot of slash/yaoi fics simply jump right into the sex without so much as a by-your-leave. Even if the slash is not likely to happen in reality in the most remote sense, I'd still like it to be a *little* more believeable than "they stared into each other's eyes and suddenly they had to have each other". Which brings us finally to the point... you have a plot! Yay! I really like it, too. It's also interesting that you made it a divergence, starting within the film. Unfortunately, since the movie's so short, fanfiction isn't given many opportunities to have a lot of diversification so far as plots are considered. *sigh* Ho-hum. But this is . An. And, eh, I don't really care if Will suffers. Actually, I like it when characters undergo a bit of torture. It can be great fun, ne? Muahahahaha! *cough choke* Lozenge! *fumbles blindly for one while coughing* Ahh, that's better. Anyway... uh, what was I saying...? Oh well. Tangent. I was kind of sad that Barbossa died in the movie... I quite often have a soft spot for villains. They're more interesting than the upright, morally sound characters. And he didn't even get to eat his apple... *sniff* Anyway, I look forward to reading more, whenever that might be. Take your time. Pressure makes for strangled plot bunnies! And... life crisis and all... Q.Q (teary eyes)
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From ANON - Celesta Hellewise Harman on August 07, 2003
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! GREAT CHAPTER!!!!! Now I REALLY can't wait for the next one! So, any new word on Melissa's father yet? I know what it's like to have cancer, only mine is brain cancer. It really bites, so I know some of what he's going through. My thoughts are with them botd I d I hope there's some absolution in this for them. But anyways, on with the review of the fic, I like the way that they cut Will's shoulder instead. I also liked your idea of Beth using the candle wax to make her head warm. I've done somthing like that, just not exactly the same. I also like how you thought out that Will would hit his head on the chest. Before you had even stated that, I was thinking of how he would fall like that. Very few people have the train of thought to think things through like that. I'm so glad that I found another person who does. Bravo babe. Bravo! BTW, don't worry if your e-mail screws up. Like I said before, it doesn't really matter the time frame that you get back to me with,it just matters that you do at some point in time. Once again, great chapter, I'm looking forward to more. BTW, have you read any of my fics yet? What do you think?

~Celesta Hellewise Harman
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From ANON - Melanie on August 07, 2003
I am sick with a fever right now, but once I get better I will definitely come back and review. Just wanted to let you know I read it and enjoyed it immensely!!! :)
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From ANON - Pookie on August 07, 2003
that was a good bit!

I liked how you got some of the movie lines into the bit where they got to the island (I can nevemembmember how to spell it's name..)

Liz sure does know how to pretend to be sick! Musta been easier then without thermometers (that is so spelled wrong..)

poor Jack, forced to eat all that food...

and now the curse is broked.. poor Will... and I hope someone gives him a band-aid soon, or else they won't have a cabin boy for long!

update soon please!
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From ANON - Sparx on August 07, 2003
Aboslutely wonderful. Man I am so in love with this fic. I have to tell you that this fic inspired me to write a fic of my own. I'm loving all the torture you are putting Will through, and I can't wait to read more of it. I wonder if Jack and Elizabeth will rescue Will before Barbossa actually rapes him, but I kind of hope not lol. Ah, poor Will. Will-torture is great.
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From ANON - Aithilin on August 07, 2003
Hi! Loved the chapter. The part with Jack having to eat all that soup was brilliant. Poor guy. ;)

I got a plot bunny while I was reading this, just another to add to the pile. *kicks away several bunnies with PotC and wri written on them*. Poor Will, if you don't kill Barbossa soon, I'll do it myself!

My dad has cancer too, but it's not that bad apparen Tum Tumour removed and all that. Then there're all my medical problems....

Write more, please?! *hands a lolly*

-Aithilin
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From ANON - Pyper on August 07, 2003
First of all, I'm enjoying your story as one of the best in the PoTC fandom.

A few historical notes: I estimated by the clothing worn in the movie tit tit takes place somewhere in the mid-1700's. This was the period that was the height of piracy in the Caribbean. Also, the complete lack of any mention of Americans makes me think that America is still part of the British colonies that include the Caribbean islands at this time.

About chocolate: by this time, it would long have been a well-known luxury, and would have been called "chocolate" by the English, from the Spanish corruption of the Aztec word. (Remember, it's at least two hundred years after Cortez.) So Will's naivety doesn't make sense.
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From ANON - Kazren on August 06, 2003
No Tears - I'm a hospice nurse and I'd be glad to help your friends father in any way I can as a resource for information or whatever. I hope he is eligible for surgery. That is really the safest and best option.

Keep writing!
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From ANON - Natalie on August 06, 2003
This is a great story; you're an amazing author! But take all the time you need. Your friends have to come first. I hope your friend's Dad will be all right.
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From ANON - Celesta Hellewise Harman on August 05, 2003
Well, tell her I send her my best. Take your time on the chapter love, and take your time on that other fic too. I know how it is when you need to be with your friends. I'm going through something of the sort with my firend Kylee right now. Yoube tbe there for her kay? Much loves! Namaarie!

~Celesta Hellewise Harman
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