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Reviews for Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs

By : jesososexy
  • From ANON - Raven on April 11, 2004
    hi this was prety good for a first one
    the language is a strange mix i would
    eigther stick the the crude "cunt" side of
    it or the "penis" side
    eigtherway its was quite good lol
    made me laugh i can tel u
    a raunchy sno wite
    luvz Ravn.x.
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  • From ANON - lynn on March 30, 2004
    hello
    I liked the basic premise, but you should add more detail, more Imagination, and more s Th There are SEVEN dwarves after all, and only one nubile, tempting young slut. Think about it.

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  • From ANON - TheChickensAteEveryThing! on March 27, 2004
    Three words....You Sick Fuck!
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  • From ANON - Tigga on March 19, 2004
    O_o oookkaaayy....
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  • From ANON - lioness_lust_lover on March 17, 2004
    write more!
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  • From ANON - Menjeltje on January 14, 2004
    Hey dude,

    That was great!! But you could lengthen it up a little if you'd want to... She came just a little to soon. I know from people I write to that they want a lengthy story so that they can jerk off. I'm Dutch by the way so I can'nd ynd you a story I wrote... sorry, if you would want one. But I'll tell my friends about your story 'cause I think it's great! :D :P
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  • From oldwolf on January 08, 2004
    An interesting take on a classical story. Fun, yet slightly strange. Most enjoyable all the way around.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 06, 2003
    it was really really good, do a follow up chapter! look at how many hits you got!
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  • From ANON - Anya3 on November 26, 2003
    Aaahhh! *faints* Oh my gods.....im seriously scared and scarred. lol
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  • From ANON - PrincessLemon on November 21, 2003
    *gasp* Holy fucking hell in a hand basket with seven hens! That was horrible *laughs* I agree with AJ, you need to take more time with your sceens, maybe you should look around here at the fics that have 5 stars on them and try mimicing your sceens after them.
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  • From AJAngelique on November 21, 2003
    *chokes on her lemonaid* Holy crow! That was horrible...funny at parts...but still horrible. You wouldn't happen to be a guy would you? It all happened to fast, you need to slow down and describe your sceens better. It's not just about the fucking, it's about the emotions as well.
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  • From ANON - Lora on October 18, 2003
    *blinks* Uh...okay. XP
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  • From ANON - tir-synni on October 09, 2003
    I knew it! I always knew it! Ha! I was proved right!! :D (Check out The Chronicles of Lucius by Fyrie--it's even mentioned in there about what was *really* going on in that cottage!)
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  • From ANON - arcee on August 19, 2003
    well that was a first .
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  • From ANON - PMS on July 26, 2003
    Needs more discription during the sex scean.
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