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Reviews for Chaos Delayed

By : Melrick
  • From mastershakeme on May 29, 2017

    Am I just selectively picking the kinks? Lol you have a knack for transporting me to the beautiful fantasy world of Asia. I had a good image of the waterfall in my head and when they start fooling around, it becomes another hot ass fuck feast! You are making me horny dude! When Rambo has the Thai girl receive from behind, I creamed a little. That's my favorite ^_^ anyways... I've never much enjoyed one shots but yours give me a little something extra. I'll probably check out a few more of these :-P thank you! 


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  • From ANON - Anon on August 29, 2014
    Welcome back! It's good to see you writing again, Melrick, and this was a wonderful return. It really is a change of pace to see Rambo given some depth, and the sort of emotional insight into himself that I'd expect him to have.

    I've never been to Thailand at all, but you do a superb job of evoking the surroundings with wonderful simplicity. You never beat us over the head with description, but you give us enough to make imagination take flight.

    Thank you so much! I truly enjoyed reading this!
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  • From pittwitch on August 28, 2014
    I cannot thank you enough for giving Rambo his due. I don't know why it has always niggled at me that the poor guy never got any. This was awesome! You set the scene so very well, from the nam manao to the young girl being unable to resist the strong silent type. My favorite part, other than of course, actually getting laid, was here:

    If he’d resisted then she would have had about as much luck as trying to take a tree for a walk, but John stood and allowed himself to be pulled along the road out of the village.

    I'm glad I could be even a tiny little bit muse-like to you. Again, I thank you and praise you for creating a masterful little piece for a difficult character to humanize.

    Melrick Rocks! Melrick rocks! Melrick rocks!

    PW
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