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Reviews for New Dawn of May - AC V

By : jinx1764
  • From ANON - Sarah on November 14, 2012
    Just thought I'd drop a quick comment to let you know that yes, I am reading these, and yes, I am enjoying it very much, and really, the only problem I have with these stories is the length of time it takes you to post a new chapter. Just thought you'd want to know ;)

    I'm very interested to find out what Suggur has to tell Jareth, and why young ears can't hear it. Should be good!! Pleeeeeeeeaaaaaase don't keep me waiting long!
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  • From FromAfar on November 14, 2012
    An intriguing beginning with hints of danger and possible confrontation! I'd like to know more of Sarah's life Aboveground, her "workweek"; will you show how exactly Jareth manages to manipulate the time? Jareth's plans to marry her are also very interesting; how did the two become lovers? Why did Sarah decide to return and be with the King?
    I really like their relationship, trust, respect and awareness of some boundaries not to be interered with. Really adult way to form a relationship.
    Hope you'll tie it all in the next chapters. Good luck with your writing.
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