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Reviews for Cerulean Seas

By : laloga13
  • From serendip on September 20, 2012


    Love what you've added! The beginning is so clear, so vivid and so romantic it just sets this perfect scene; I love how it has this dreamy feel to it, but at the same time it's real. It is an honest dream come true. The thought makes my heart stop. Obi on the beach. Mmmmmm. I love the picture of him coming out of the waves... ohhhh, *swoon*. Something else I think you added - him pushing his hair back - that struck me so clearly, the motion, the play of his muscles... How I love sexy wet Obi. And I love the last line "I'm all yours."

    With Keren and Obi there's this overwhelming sense of how good they are for each other and an eagerness to everything they do together that is really exciting and fresh. I just love how much she wants him, and it's still kind of new for her so it's so much fun too. The way he affects her so greatly is just so sexy. The bits of teasing, the affection and the way they desire each other so much are so fun to read and play  with.

    In the end, they just can't resist each other, ever, and it makes it so fun and sexy. And of course leaves the door wide open for a number of ways they could get in trouble. So many possibilities! (Please?? More??!)

    I love Lys, I love how you've written her and I had so much fun, thanks for letting me help with this. 

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  • From taramidala on September 17, 2012
    Fantastic work, ladies! Sweet and beyond sexy. I don't know this character Keren at all but she suits Obi-Wan very well, and he certainly seems to enjoy her! ;)
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