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Reviews for Just A Kiss

By : Lily-Beth_Bluebell
  • From ANON - SP777 on December 20, 2012
    I'm just now discovering the Labyrinth fanfiction on this site.

    ..and with that said I thoroughly enjoyed this.
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  • From ANON - NotSarahK on July 28, 2012
    It would have been nice to have made a second chapter. You know finish it ....in bed ^_^
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  • From astrapotter on July 13, 2012
    I love it!!!
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  • From FromAfar on July 07, 2012
    A strange and funny story to me. Poor Jareth, now he's bargaining just *a kiss* for some little service, a favor, to Sarah.. how mighty have fallen!
    Jareth, the Goblin King - a broken car and a tank of gasoline. What a combination! :) Truly the fall.
    Why such a long, tiring -at least for sarah - dialogue, with lots of very mundane questions, as if the King hasn't seen everything through his crystal? He must have been watching the girl, so.. why? Was he pretending, playing a part of an old friend? Obviously, she didn't care.
    And really, should one wonder if some predator is approaching him in a dark forest? It's only natural, so why such a surprise? Sarah's a bad actress.
    What about three opening sentences? Why not to organize them into one?
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