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Reviews for Teyr

By : laloga13
  • From ANON - Felix on July 27, 2015
    Very good read, lots of character and the descriptions were amazing. Love it.
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  • From ANON - Ryua on September 16, 2012
    This was beautifully written. A seriously hot sex scene, here, and some really nice character interaction.
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  • From NakedClones on May 20, 2012
    (sigh)

    Positively amazing.

    There is something about Stonewall and Trax together that is so magnetic. This is just a great time, too, in Stonewall's life as he has just discovered his Force abilities. Love how distracted he is at the beginning of the story and nearly walking off the cliff. Trax is so concerned about him, and Stone keeps brushing off his concerns. But, clearly Stonewall is not himself and his new Force abilities are somewhat overwhelming to him.

    Love how distracted he gets, as well, by Trax's attraction to him. "Stop it!" I was just amused as anything once he figured out what Trax was doing, (the telltale motion of his right arm), and then when he tapped into his thoughts... Yow. HOT.

    Stone was so sweet when he felt GUILTY for having kissed Trax and had to go and confess all to Kali. How loyal and sweet is he? And, then Kali just had to go and give him her blessing? No, no, Stone, I want you to go out and have some mind-blowing sex with that man there... Uh, OK, honey, thanks, I'll do that. Gheesh, what a woman. Gotta' love Kali. Greatest woman ever. How lucky is Stone? Seriously. Dude, you have no idea how lucky you are. But, the greatest line possibly ever written in fanfic, and I'm just paraphrasing because I can't easily cut and paste right now. "Trax, I have to apologize for kissing you like that before." "I should have done it like this." Whoa. Not going to forget that line anytime soon. So freakin' inspired. I love it. Love it. love it. love it.

    Hey, i noticed that you mentioned Stone's scar a lot and reference to how he got it on Teyr and how much Trax loves the scar, how it tingles, how Trax kisses the scar, etc. So, that seems to beg the obvious, how about a little ficlet that takes place on Teyr giving the story of how Stone originally gets the scar? Seems to be such a big part of him.

    This story was classic. Definitely one I will want to read again and again.
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  • From Jade_Max on May 20, 2012
    So you already know how much I love this fic, but it deserves to get an 'official' review.

    Traxis and Stonewall are such an intriguing combination. That both of them, pardon the expression, bat for opposite teams but still come together with such intensity and passion is a testament to the trust between the men and the talent you have to bring it to the forefront.

    The setting for this is perfect.

    Stone is so imbalanced by the locale, the memories, the electricity and power of Traxis' arousal and attraction he practically feeds off it, combined with his new susceptibility to the Force and his inability to control it make a potent mix that makes me empathize with Stone - and eagerly anticipate his inability to control it ;)

    On that, you don't disappoint.

    Using Trax as the trigger - his masturbation to what had occurred between Stone and Kali and him before - to add to Stone's difficulties is sheer genius. Stone has his own memories of the encounter and those certainly aren't helping him at this juncture ;) That he's swept away enough to initiate the contact and kiss Trax is so telling of his frame of mind and inability to master the Force and the feelings within him.

    His reach out to Kali is sweet and touching and she, as always, is both supportive and understanding and it's fantastic to read.

    Stone then, with Kali's permission, proceeds to throw himself with boundless enthusiasm into the act. The best part at the beginning of the whole thing, I felt, was the discussion before hand with Trax cornering Stone on the whole situation.

    Traxis making a point to tell Stone that he and Kali are different - not better or worse, just different, really struck a chord with me and does so on every read through; I love this moment. It really hammers home that 'this is about to happen' and it feels like that's Stone's sense of things too. It's a way of anchoring the scene in 'reality' and it works just beautifully :)

    They discuss what's about to happen frankly, Stone being forced to face it head on and not just get swept away and then defers to Trax's greater experience with Trax - unexpectedly, it almost feels - taking the lead and instructing Stonewall with questions and discussion more than orders.

    That Trax gets turned on by being ordered around is *such* a thing for me; he's the perfect man to take an order *smirk* though he must spend a lot of time in discomfort [or perhaps that's where his perfect control / focus comes from?] or very used to it *chuckle*

    The scenes between them are a fantastically hot mix of need, passion, instruction and their own breed of tenderness. Stone picking up, unintentionally it seems, on the fact that Traxis likes being ordered about and dominated by the right partner is just too awesome. It shines through and really adds to the sense of enjoyment and satisfaction between them.

    And then, when it's all over, Kali gets her two creds and teases Stone about his enthusiasm *laughs* Ah Stone, you've exhausted poor Traxis in the best way possible :D

    This is such a fantastic piece for so many reasons; there's just so much going on and I love all the different layers! Fantastic :D
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  • From ANON - Jadedsnowtiger on May 15, 2012
    holy shit!!!!
    Now I have to change my underwear.....again.... have I ever told you you're awesome!!!

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