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Reviews for Falling --COMPLETED

By : jinx1764
  • From ANON - MissFang on August 21, 2012
    Love the story! It's well paced, and I love the balance of grittiness, romance, and adventure. Captivating. Please keep writing!! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter....
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  • From ANON - wolfmoonsshadow on August 16, 2012
    I know by the time you read this you will have already had your surgery. I just wanted to wish you the best of luck with your recovery; and the hope that this inconvenience in your life be only temporary. Being on dialysis for 9 years now i know how hopeless it can seem when you let your mind stagnate. Keep moving towards your goals, and best of luck!
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  • From ANON - wolfmoonsshadow on July 24, 2012
    I love it even without the smut! Keeps getting better and better
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  • From ArkaadV on July 20, 2012
    Ok, so the way Chapter 21 ended had me hearing 'Bodies' by Drowning Pool in my head. LOL! As always, I am perched on the edge awaiting your next update!
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  • From Myna on July 19, 2012
    OH MAN!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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  • From Myna on July 08, 2012
    OH ITS GETTING REALLY HEAVY NOW!
    cant wait to see how this works out!
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  • From ANON - wolfmoonsshadow on July 08, 2012
    I'm not surprised to hear that the story is older than the posting made it seem, the thought that has obviously gone into it is amazing. The only other stories i have read that has conveyed post apocalyptic world so well were the novels "False dawn" and "Dinner at deviants palace" your story has a good sense of the difficulties of trying to rebuild society and civilization just being a veneer for many. It will be a good novella (or novel, should you choose to take it that far far) when you change it to put your OC in. You've developed a world that has its own ruled, and they feel reasonable, not made arbitrarily for the convenience of the plot you want, but more like what might actually occur.
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  • From ArkaadV on June 29, 2012
    Smashing, my dear! Just finished 'Within Dreams' while waiting for chapter 19 and it was awesome as well! I loves me some character torture....heh heh heh....
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  • From ArkaadV on June 26, 2012
    Awaiting the next chapter with bated breath....
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  • From ANON - wolfmoonsshadow on June 25, 2012
    Its hard to believe its been little more than a month, your story has come along so well! So very impressive, jareth and Sarah are themselves with their history, but the new angles make them quite almost OC. Bringing out new facets or preparing to slide this situ over to your new characters? Either way its a very engaging story. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From LunarMidnight on June 13, 2012
    Yay I found you from FF yay glad to see you still updating :D
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  • From ANON - buffy on June 10, 2012
    Muhahahahahaha I have found you again! Lolololololol now to sign up...
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  • From Myna on June 06, 2012
    Love this story!! waiting with bated breath for the next part!
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  • From ElegantMess on June 05, 2012
    I am so excited to find a new story by you!!! I've spent the last hour or so getting caught up on this one. I love post-apocaliptic stuff! I've read both Last Resort and Within Dreams. I love how you characterize Jareth. This looks really good and I wait in pins and needles for each new chapter as it comes out!!
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  • From ANON - wolfmoonsshadow on May 18, 2012
    No thanks necessary, i have read all your stories and find them entertaining and well written. I am curious to see how you continue this one. :)
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