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Reviews for One, Two, Three

By : laloga13
  • From ANON - Jade_Max on February 19, 2012
    Kali is evil.

    I totally felt for Stone in this one; having her drive him to distraction and then only be allowed to -watch-? That woman has sith-like tendencies, doesn't she?

    Of course, she always makes it worth his while...

    I like how she ambushed him, her intentions obvious but completely unexpected each time except the last and even in the last she manages to turn him on his ear. The relationship between these two is fantastic; very well developed.

    You might not know where this one came from, but I'm glad you wrote it; it was a lot of fun even if you used it to torture poor Stone :p
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  • From WithPlot on January 24, 2012
    I'm really enjoying these. The pacing is perfect, and it's easy to like your OCs. Keep up the good work!
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  • From serendip on January 19, 2012
    What is it with these Jedi and counting and sex? Have to keep track of things, I suppose. Nicely spicy, I was a fan of number two myself, liked how he liked her 'encouraging' words :D More indeed. And I like how your writing is expanding over here on a different level. Keep it up! ;) *cough* threesome *cough*
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  • From ANON - Jadedsnowtiger on January 18, 2012
    Very hot... Highly enjoying the fact I found you on this website.
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