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Reviews for The Age of Temptation

By : TCardan
  • From ANON - Holly on June 06, 2012
    I stumbled upon this story late last night and I am so in love! I have been a big fan of yours for a few years now. I have to say that "What a Witch Needs" is my most favorite Harry Potter fanfiction and I am so glad that you are writing for one of my other favorite fandoms, the Covenant. I can't wait til you update, I absolutely love this story! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - anonym on May 19, 2012
    Yay a new chapter! Loved the tension between Pogue and Madi, though I have to admit I was cringing when they were publically being intimate (I was like, oh no pogue! dont do that to Madi!) ESPECIALLY when everyone was watching.
    Sarah has no idea, poor girl, but wait until she discovers the drawer Caleb keeps with all Madi's underwear. (I sure hope its magically locked or something.)
    I find it interesting that Caleb seems to be losing any guilt for cheating on Sarah especially the more he spends time with Madison. How will Sarah think of Madison when she does find out?

    I really find it interesting to explore the concept of one woman to several men, especially since this group will need to have kids with someone outside the group.
    A quick observation about the break-up, Sarah mentions that Tyler was SO GOOD to Madison, so Madi should have been faithful/better to him. Real life reactions to similar situations are very true to this sentiment. It made me think how we get this idea that because someone was 'good to another' in a relationship, they are thereby exempt from analysis/judgement on how the relationship went. (I think we stick our noses in because we learn from others about human behavior and to learn how to behave/not behave.) For example, Tyler being 'good' to Madi as seen from Public view should not earn Madi disapproval. ALSO, the whole double standard thing--Reid gets to be a 'playa' but when Madi seems to start down that path...? Tell Sarah she should know better. (I'm assuming she would.)
    Finally, I must pose a question...without the intent of changing your path of the story: Will they discover that TOO much sex (unfortunately there is such a thing) causes consequences? (I.e. makes them drunk/delirious/high/or suffer from maniac episodes? Could be a source for later sexual tension--oh the angst of wanting to have sex but wanting to avoid potential whatevs--)

    Thanks for writing! Oddly, I wasn't a huge fan of the movie but for some reason I clicked on this link and I became hooked. (sorry for this essay, btw) Hope to see a new chap sometime soon!
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  • From ANON - Manic on May 17, 2012
    Love everything as always!
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  • From ANON - hooked on May 11, 2012
    Please, please, please write when you get a chance! This fic has to be one of the only ones that I've come back to weeks/months later hoping to see more chapters. I'm literally hooked on finding out what happens next. If this was a hardcopy novel it'd be one I'd stay up 24hrs just to read in one sitting. Pogue has to be my fav pairing besides caleb so I will be even more anxious until you post the next chapter or two (I'm being optimistic, lol).
    --hooked
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  • From ANON - NightShadow on March 14, 2012
    lol Yeah I'm still here. I like waiting a bit to read them so that way i can read more than the one chapter at a time. I loved this one and i can not wait for the next one... but if i have too i guess i will :P. Thank you for continuing on with it.
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  • From ANON - Manic on March 06, 2012
    THIS STORY IS AMAZING. I'm going to be extremely needy and ask you to update again ASAP. A.S.A.P.
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  • From ANON - Delray on February 24, 2012
    another awesome chapter. update soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 12, 2012
    I enjoy this story sooo much, keep updating!
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  • From ANON - Delray on January 27, 2012
    another awesome chapter. update soon
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  • From ANON - Delray on January 15, 2012
    another great chapter. cant wait to see what happens next. update soon
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  • From ANON - Delray on January 08, 2012
    I absolutely love this story. hope you update soon
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  • From ANON - NightShadow on December 20, 2011
    That last chapter was great. I just wish we could have the whole fic at one time... but i know fic writing isnt easy and even books sometimes takes years to write... I can probably say that as much as we all hate cliffhangers, we love them as they mean the story continues on. I cant wait for the next one Petal ^^.

    Much love,

    NightShadow
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  • From ANON - NightShadow on December 15, 2011
    I loved this chapter... i have only one thing to say that needs correcting lol... Can you please make longer chapters or update soon please? I love your writing style and keep up the kick ass work! ^^
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  • From ANON - Jenn on December 11, 2011
    That was great!
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  • From ANON - NightShadow on December 04, 2011
    i loved this chapter and i cant wait for the next. Yes i would love a more detailed scene of the three. Update soon please.
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