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Reviews for A Desert Lovely

By : NomdePlume2
  • From AussieVampGirl on November 19, 2012
    I like it. Any chance there is a 2nd chapter with the cabin scene? :) Kinda jealous of Alice right now.
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  • From themaidenlyra on March 05, 2012
    Interesting little tidbit but some sex would have been nice. Lmao. I personly thought you did fine with both ~Smirks~


    All My Love The Maiden Lyra
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  • From wolfmoonsshadow on July 27, 2011
    Pretty fun! I think you have the characters down, I could hear them in my head and it sounded right. :)
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  • From AlBelle on April 26, 2011
    Honestly, I love it... you write Jack SParrow so very well! I'm jealous!

    Oh, and the ideas of what those three could (and would!) get up to in the bedroom :)

    Me heart is all a flutter!

    Well done! Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Mezzaneen on March 24, 2011
    WONDERFUL work! I thought they were both really believable. I could hear their voices in my head with the dialogue. This is a really cute piece and I'm so in love. Perhaps there could be more? :3 Tease. Thank you so much for sharing this!
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  • From chiken8mafechan on February 11, 2011
    jajajaj loved the crossover! and yes! you made them very believable, but you cut it just at the steamy part!!! come on!
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