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Reviews for Survival of the Fittest

By : DagdothFliesh
  • From ANON - Anon on December 24, 2014
    Great story. Great plot. Good use of details. I hope for more of this story and that
    Gray-hair and gweyn (probably spelled the name wrong) get into a good relationship.
    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Julie on March 14, 2014
    OMG!! I love this story!! I really hope you continue to write more chapters. I really want to know what happens between gray hair and yeyinde!!! Awesome story!!! PLEASE keep me posted and let me know when you post more chapters or maybe its up on another website.
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  • From ANON - wolf on July 07, 2012
    I hate to be that guy but I thought that id let u know that the Smith&Waston M 500 is not the gun from dirty Harry and its not a 44. Maggnum. The S&W 500. Is chambered in the 500. Maggnum cartridge witch just as u said kicks like a fucking mule (definitely the way to go if you plan on settling a score with the fucking predetor) its mostly a big game hunnting cartridge but iv seen them put quarter inch holes in a half inch thick steel plate from 25 yards. The 44 mag. U mentioned from dirty Harry is the S&W Model 29. Sorry if I kind of sounded like a Dick but guns are something I known my hole life and since u seem so into the realism thing I thought Id let u know about the mistake again I'm sorry if I sounded like a Dick I love the stories and hope u haven't disscontinude it. (I really wanna see that tucking bad blood get his.)

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  • From jectex57 on August 26, 2011
    Interesting. let me know whenyou update, please.
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  • From ANON - Kia on August 10, 2011
    I noticed you haven't updated in a little while... which is too bad, cuz this fic is shaping up to be a good one.
    Next update, I'll be reading it faster than a facehugger on a human. lol
    Love where you're going, really. Love the use of Yautja language, too.
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  • From AntiDolorifico on June 19, 2011
    Hey! YOU! Where is the next update? Don't make me go all spanky on you.

    =)
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  • From spooksies on April 02, 2011
    pretty please be done with the next chapter please?!?!?!
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  • From ANON - Thai-guan on March 30, 2011
    Oh My Kami, I really have to say I'm loving thisfic! the amount of detail and accuracy you achieve is fantastic. it's relistic, dramatic, funny at times and you paint such a clear picture that one can't help but be...cativated, sucked in by it. I really am dying to see where you go with this fic. it's better than some published books I've read.
    XD
    MN
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  • From pewpew on March 05, 2011
    I have the next chapter of One More out to my beta right now!

    Where's your next chapter? I can't wait for more. I love the character dynamics, and that some qualities are universal (like men and booze, lol).

    Crossing my fingers for smut, even if it's only almost smut. :D
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  • From ANON - caz on February 28, 2011
    do i have to poke you again?
    *sharpens author-poking stick*
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  • From PrimitiveScrewhead on February 04, 2011
    OH! ps: best word in this chappie? 'wife-monster'. BAHAHAHA!

    gonna start pacing now til you update. I hold you responsible for the groove in the floor. :P
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  • From ginstar3 on February 01, 2011
    It would be awesome if Ujik’va made some sort of translator or translator microbes (IE Farscape). Wow can you imagine waking up with your hand wrapped around an aliens cock? LOLz I can understand her mortification. And, I'm also wondering if Duke(?) saw Asshole rape her. Damaged goods? What a fucker. I'm glad she busted his nose. I love how gritty and raw this story is. The realism to me, is like catnip to a cat. Keep it up. Can't wait for the throw down with Asshole. I hope she puts a bullet right between his eyes. Please update soon.
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  • From tammathaamr on January 31, 2011
    Yes It is as I always say nice to come back to new chapters. You are still doing a good job with the grit. I like that the story flows smooth. I also like the near "pet" aspect frame of mind grey hair seems to have for our abused but still standing lead lady. I like more story than smut, you are coming across with the story and that gets an "A" in my book. keep up the good work, deep and dark you seem to have a knack for :) mmmmwwaaahh!
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  • From LadyOfDaGame on January 31, 2011
    another classic work of art i can't wait for the next one
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  • From ANON - beliefinkakashi on January 31, 2011
    YES! An update! *shakes my little tushie in your honour*
    Things just dont go her way, do they? I wonder what it is like inside of the Titan, how the power systems are, whose alive, who isn't... Interesting addition to the mix!

    I cannot believe she woke up sucking him off. O.o Admittedly, the dream, bath, and reality was a little hot... The heater must have turned on in here...

    Anyway, before I rant on even more. Great work, Excited that you updated... I've like read everything Pred. on this site... so Its good to have more! *insert insane laugh here*

    P.S. Duke is an ASS! He deserves to be shot by the Dirty Harry replica/model. Please don't kill the Doc, I like him! But if it is in the best interest of the story, by all means.

    Good luck.
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