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Reviews for Survival of the Fittest

By : DagdothFliesh
  • From bloodravyn on January 31, 2011
    damn!
    loved!
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  • From PrimitiveScrewhead on January 30, 2011
    Oh you know you like a good poking hahaha
    I quite literally squeed when I saw this had been updated.
    Rawr what a dream. and I don't think he's OOC. He doesn't consider her hot or anything, it's the scent, and her toughness and mercy that draws him. And it's normal that he's holding back cause of the taboo of stuffing prey. LOL.
    Can't wait to see what happens on the Titan, Asskickery abounds!

    gonna reread and crash. bwah!
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  • From ANON - Caz on January 30, 2011
    *poke*

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  • From DeathGodDist on January 08, 2011
    Still immensely enjoying this story so much. I loved this chapter and finally getting the POV of "Grey-Hair" and finding out where he's coming from. I was surprised to see her former crew-mates still alive, and finding out how one of them purposefully left her behind and she suffered because of it, what a bastard.

    And yeah, still got the grit behind it, which is what I am loving. Can't wait to see where you will take things next.
    -DGD
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  • From LadyOfDaGame on January 08, 2011
    Oh no doubt! ^-^ Who in their right mind wouldn't love the dark side with all its perks! I mean just think about it you get free XXX rated entertainment so you know its the good stuff. Then as an added bonus when you join up they give you milk AND cookies. Now tell me who wouldn't join up for that!
    Sooo can't wait for that next chap seriously just me knowing that your gonna turn up the heat in it has me wishing I had ESP so I would like instantly know exactly when you'd be posting it!
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  • From pewpew on January 06, 2011
    I love the update, and I love the predator pov. I'm a personal fan of 3rd person, usually, but to be honest, I didn't even notice the pov swap. I was too busy being engrossed in the story. My vote is for whichever makes updating faster. ;)

    I think you're doing well. Great start and solid writing. Drool worthy. Looking forward to smut. :D
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  • From ANON - cricket on January 06, 2011
    I actually think you did a great job with the first perspective and switching to 3rd with Grey-Hair. Not many can pull it off but you kept it flowing I think. Thank you for the update! I can not wait for the next chapter! This story is exciting and keeps me guessing!
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  • From bloodravyn on January 06, 2011
    i honestly hope Gwyn gets to KILL duke before this is over, the jerkwad!
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  • From ANON - beliefinkakashi on January 06, 2011
    Impressive!
    I'm surprised she hasn't kicked the bucket yet. That was two giant preddies cocks in her!... >.< And she's still MOVING!... She's a natural survivor!
    Too bad she is unable to bare children... I wonder what is going to happen to her once she obtains her revenge. Kill the male Oomans!!!!! *insert evil laugh here*
    I love it!
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  • From ANON - GrayHuntress on January 05, 2011
    Absolutely LOVE your story. Great drama, great smut, great job with the Yautja. Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Caz on December 30, 2010
    Nickname for the badblood? how about Asshole. LOL. Ugh, i'd love to snap his neck. So far I'm liking Grey Hair. Keep it up, this story is visceral and groovy.
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  • From fnxmoon2 on December 29, 2010
    Cool, keep it up
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  • From DeathGodDist on December 29, 2010
    Wow, gritty indeed. This is quite a unique take on things and I really am enjoying it. I can't even begin to imagine where you'll take things from here, and that's a good thing. This whole story is truly intense, but that was a very intense scene at the end of the current chapter, poor girl is really enduring things. And yes, definitely not what I was expecting for her first introduction to the potential love interest, heh, I wonder how they'll reconcile that.

    Looking forward to more.
    -DGD
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  • From ANON - Kia on December 27, 2010
    :D well, I'm not too fond of the whole rape part of course haha but this seems to be turning into a really good, original story! Please please continue! I want to hear what happens. I hope you won't abandon this or anything. ^_^

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  • From ANON - Dark on December 26, 2010
    Love your story, very original and i can't wait to see what happens next!Q!!

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