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Reviews for The First Night

By : LadyKnightShade
  • From DisneyGrrrl on October 17, 2011
    Awesome! Very hot! I've often thought their first time would be, not rushed but not languid either. A brisk deliberate pace. Very well done, great descriptions of the thoughts and emotions going on enhanced rather than slowed down the action. So glad I took the time to track this one down! Thanks for sharing, and please write more!
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  • From jjohnson on January 05, 2011
    Nice story. Glad to see more Megamind fiction. =)

    I also wanted to let you know that there is now a Movies > M > Megamind section and you should recategorize your story over there so that more people can find it and enjoy it.
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  • From vanillacookie on January 01, 2011
    Love love love this story!!
    FYI There is now a Movies > M > Megamind section. YOu should go re categorize your story under there :D
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  • From Danyealle on December 05, 2010

    Please correct your disclaimer


    It does not contain one of the two required elements. Namely, the part in which you state that no profit is made. It must be clearly stated in that you make no money/profit.


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    Please remove this review once your disclaimer is corrected.





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  • From Mist on November 24, 2010
    Truly excellent first chapter! I absolutely love your take on Roxie and how she feels about sex -- so very few people seem to think like this and I find it so refreshing to read a fic where the character actually decides to sleep with someone not only because their libido is telling them to.

    Also love her thoughts about how Megamind treats her as an equal and doesn't push her. Seriously well done!
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  • From sillyneko345 on November 18, 2010
    Megamind totally would mispronounce lasagna! That's a great detail. Nice story, I really liked it :)
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  • From luannfeld on November 17, 2010
    More please! I finally found it last night (finally realized there's no category for Megamind yet on this site) and just re-read it. Would love more chapters, please.
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