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Reviews for Undertow

By : vanillalace
  • From anniiemarie on July 15, 2013
    Beautifully written with such detail and emotion. My favorite! I was so excited when I saw you updated! Can not wait to read more! Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Yarr on June 23, 2013
    More! Oh please, update! This story is amazing. You can't leave us hanging like this...
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  • From ANON - Cristal on March 23, 2013
    Hello, im Cristal
    I been reading ur stories, alosome stories. love them all. no arguement on me but i am unwondering or unsure; did you wrote The Ripple of Stone that is 35 Pages on Yeyinde/FanFiction? just asking
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  • From ANON - KarenLioncourt on April 08, 2012
    *fangirl squeal* OMG this fic is so awesome! :D
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  • From ANON - yarr on March 19, 2012
    "Undertow" is amazing, darling! I'm hooked. The characters, the plot, how detailed it is,... everything! I hope that you keep up the great work and update soon. I love your other Predator stories as well. I remember reading them a long time ago. You are a brilliant writer.

    ~yare
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  • From ANON - Grayhuntress on February 04, 2012
    Amazing action, esp. at the end. The angst over Eceri is a bit much for me, but overall a very good story. I look forward to more.
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  • From GrayHuntress on July 02, 2011
    Please, please, please continue!
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  • From spooksies on June 11, 2011
    PLEASE please PLEASE please UPDATE!!!

    i wanna know about what they are gonna do to each other!!!!



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  • From spooksies on May 15, 2011
    GAH!!! bloody computer!!!

    i really like your story!

    i hope you have more chapters for this!
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  • From bloodravyn on May 14, 2011
    loved!
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  • From GrayHuntress on May 12, 2011
    Fabulous story, great sexual tension building. Enjoying your descriptive style, it really brings me into the story.
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  • From ANON - predator808 on November 17, 2010
    plz do chapter 5 soon
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  • From DeathGodDist on October 25, 2010
    Heh, wow, what a turbulent relationship these two have. From nearly killing each other to ending up in their arms. I almost thought the last part was a dream or hallucination, it did seem to end a bit abruptly. Either way I love how this story is progressing. It will be very interesting to see what comes from this new development and how that impacts the plans to have Kate "escape".

    Can't wait for more. :)
    -DGD
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  • From butterflies1974 on October 20, 2010
    This story is really good you have made the Predators very intelligent stragetic hunters and for that I am very happy. I am quite interested in finding out what is going to happen next.
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  • From bloodravyn on October 20, 2010
    can you watch your spelling and grammar a bit more?
    i like the story, but can't get into it as much as i could if those mistakes didn't keep tripping me up
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