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Reviews for Submission

By : MissMalfoy
  • From ANON - Lord Darling on April 05, 2011
    Good God. That is so amazing. Not a single line is out of place. It's astonishingly accomplished, how deftly you stoke the feverish tension into desperate agony, how feral and contagiously mindless the coupling is. The way you break Jim is a piece of art-your description of 'mental claws...holding him down' - what a wondrous bit of imagery. I unashamedly LOVE this fic as it's everything I could ask for, and I just know I'll revisit it very soon! Thank you so much, thank you. Brilliant.
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  • From ANON - Nacht Kind on August 11, 2010
    Ohboyohboyohboyohboyohboyohboy......

    THAT is why Pon Farr is such a famous plot device. I adored the sensory expression, particularly fro Kirk's vantage point. The dominance and submission play was delicious and intense without becoming unbelievable given Kirk's unfamiliarity and personal qualms over that kind of power exchange. I love Spock as a dominating force of nature.

    Yummy in my tummy,
    Nacht
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  • From ANON - PBOCG on July 29, 2010
    Holy shiznit that was fucking hot XD. gotta love submissive Kirk :)
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  • From butterflies1974 on June 05, 2010
    I really liked this story especially with Spock being the one in charge and with him taming Jim....it made for a brilliant read. I loved that Jim had to totally submit to Spock before he could get his satisfaction. Hope you write more like this story.
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  • From ANON - l-girl on June 05, 2010
    OH MY GOD!!!!!!! That has to be the HOTTEST sex scene I have read in a long time. I mean DAMN. *wipes away nosebleed* Please write more.
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  • From beloved18 on June 05, 2010
    Oh, my. That was HOT! It was steamy, sexy and well written. I can't wait to see what else you write.
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