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Reviews for Challenging the Balance

By : BlueBastard
  • From Takai153 on July 11, 2011
    Awesome story! The plot is funny as hell and your your doing a great job with the character development. I can't wait for some real sex between Jake and Tsu'tey. If the light one in chapter two is any sign, those scene will be absolutely incredible. Are you going to turn Jake back into a guy? I'd like to see her stay as a woman, its really original and that transformation was why I started reading this. I hope at least you'll write a couple of full on sex scenes between them while Jake is still a girl (and it'd be even better if Tsu'tey would lay claim to all three of her holes :p). Keep up the awesome job and please update as soon as you can!!
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  • From MichiTheThird on March 20, 2011
    You know...I usually LIVE for your slash, but DAMN is this story hot. Which only proves how much I love your writing style. At this point, I don't even care if Jake gets turned BACK! I hope you keep this story going! Tsu'tey needs all the help he can get! You can do it, Tsu'tey, hang in there. Jake will be yours. *evil chuckle*
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  • From ANON - Boopster on February 17, 2011
    I noticed it's been a loooooong time since you've worked on this story. BUT! I really hope that you continue on with it. It's quite enthralling. ^_^
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  • From ANON - GB on December 16, 2010
    Totally awesome and amazing. I hope you plan to continue this soon. I'll be watching for updates. :)
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  • From ANON - Chiaki D. on November 29, 2010
    Another helping of this one TOO, please! And I think I just better go ahead and read ALL of your fics. Thanks again!
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  • From acisse on November 02, 2010
    I started this with mild curiosity and became engrossed with your story. I loved it the passion and heat I feel from the character was great. Please continue to update I look forward to reading more from you.
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  • From ANON - sky_040 on October 30, 2010
    love ur story at first i wasnt so sure but i'm hooked love it please update soon don't give up!
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  • From mancer on August 31, 2010
    Hmm interesting idea there; definitely interested to see the change of things when/if Jake turns back. (I'll admit it, I feel worse for his ikran than him!)

    Oh, and out of curiosity, what's up with the Na'vi words in the last chapter? I *think* its supposed to be that Tsu'tey is saying stuff in Na'vi that Jake doesn't know yet... but maybe you could make that clearer in the beginning?
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  • From ANON - Silent-Sunrise on August 23, 2010
    i love it....its really sweet!
    let me know when you update on:

    music - prodigy - at - work (at) hotmail (DOT) co (DOT) uk

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  • From ANON - Jerlayne on July 28, 2010
    when the hell are you gonna update? It's like my favourite fic and its hanging in limbo D: i demand another chapter :P please? MORE!
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  • From ANON - Werewolf-Phoenix Sisters on July 03, 2010
    We really love the lemon! Tsu'tey is fuckin hott, don't care if people think its weird. We really dont care what people think, keep up the fucking awesome work!!!
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  • From WithMyRingHand on July 02, 2010
    *sad face with trembly lower lip*
    you left off the Obi/Maul fic and I was sooooo sad.

    But I hope you intend to update this story soon.

    Or else I'll have to cry.

    *sniff*
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  • From xcalibrswnsn on June 16, 2010
    MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!! xD
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on June 04, 2010
    I totally appreciate chappie 5! Though I wish it were longer, it was still so awesome to finally read it. Though I'm still curious with the situation named Akwey, I would love to see a jealous Tsu'tey ;). Also I almost forgot, is Norm in love with Jake, sounds like he may have been?
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  • From ANON - jerlayne on June 01, 2010
    you MUST continueeeee!!!! It's one of my fave stories and I'm dying waiting for the next chapter :P
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