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Reviews for A Prime guide on how to steal a girl

By : Edison
  • From ANON - Optimus' love on August 17, 2011
    Damn You! Please update another chapter! I've been waiting so long for you to update because I really really love this fiction! Pretty please! I would like to know more about how Optimus and Mikaela got together and Sam will be out of the way! Please!!!
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  • From Harpybabe on September 25, 2010
    Hey!!! I am waiting since March and I am really impatient now. When do you want to update? This story rocks and your reviewers do enjoy this fic. So bring your fingers down to press keys on the keyboard and write another chapter or I will be mad and much more than now. UPDATE SOON and that's a threat XD
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  • From ANON - Phoenix91 on June 07, 2010
    Hey!!! Pretty please don't torture us. I beg of you. This is a story I can't stop rereading. I finished it now and please update soon. Please, please, please, please. I count on you. Please
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  • From ANON - TFfan on May 31, 2010
    UPDATE!!! I can't take this anymore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! I can't take that Optimus and Mikaela aren't together and Sam has to be there to interrupt everything. Please update soon!!!!!!!!! I want to read more about this fic. This is a very good fic and I just can't sit here and wait. I check on this fic several times on a day. Please
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  • From ANON - Nancy on April 14, 2010
    Hey I am anxious to see what's next so pretty please update as soon as possible. This is the greatest fic I've ever read so please don't tease us. Please update soon.
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  • From Granite on March 17, 2010
    I like this very much and i hope you update soon. I find Prime and Mykaela to be addictive. I love the way you write them.
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  • From Harbor on March 14, 2010
    I am so addicted to this story. I Love the way you write Prime and Mykaela. This story is so well put together. I love the concept of it. You have the makings of an awesome story on your hands. I wuait impatiently for your next update.
    SafeHaven
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  • From ANON - vibe on March 14, 2010
    I love this story and you are doing an excellent job with it. I mean it flows so easily and is well written. Prime and Mykaela are awesome and you make them sizzle when they are together.
    Since you are the author I know there is some way that you can write Sam out of the story;LOL kill him or something.
    You are an awesome writer so please continue.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 13, 2010
    I love the dialogue between Prime and Mykaela! It is raw passion, addictive, sexy addictive,primal; I absolutely love it. I could read fourteen chapters of that alone but I know you have to put other stuff in it and that brings me to my next point. You put thought into the compostion of this story. You did not just throw something together hoping it would stick. You actually made this so solid I hate that I have to wait to read more of PriMyk. I think this story is awesome so hurry up with chapter five I need my fix.
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  • From RaeRae on March 13, 2010
    The concept has merit, and could certainly be a very interesting story. My only problems with it are your punctuation, which is minimal to non-existent, and your grammar. You tend to switch verb tenses a lot, or use the incorrect form of the verb entirely, and many of your sentences need a comma, or some other form of punctuation, to keep them from being run ons. Other than that, great story. :)
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  • From ANON - khale on March 13, 2010
    Give it up Sam you cannot stop BigBoy when he wants something. I LVOE the way you write and I LOVE this story.Prime is all SEXY and strong Keep writing!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Nancy on March 10, 2010
    Pretty please update soon. It's so erotic I hope they will get to the point. And without Sam's interruption. Please kill him or make the decepticons kidnap him or bury him just get him out of the way. Prime is soo sexy, irresistable. Make them a couple yayyy little babies or sparklings :) that would be gooodddd. Please pretty please update sooooooooooooonnnnnnnn. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From Carelessl on January 21, 2010
    This I was not expecting. This story is amazing. And, this in a section that I did not think many check that ANY good stories would develope from. This story is well written and composed. I am definately returning for more.
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  • From Parts on January 20, 2010
    I love how this story is coming along. Usually one can tell by the third chapter if the writer can maintain thier ability to feed your addiction and you have. This is Marvelous stuff. I look forward to more.
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  • From Payden on January 20, 2010
    Wonderfully Done! I love the writing because it flows and creates a mood that I find awesome!. You have a fanstatic story on your hands so continue
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