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Reviews for In the Hollow of the Heart

By : bonnyblonde
  • From ANON - Elaryn on August 13, 2014
    Wow. I started reading this story with a cautious attitude. The Barbossa and Elizabeth pairing seemed unlikely, but I kept reading. The more I reward, the more I warmed to the concept of the story, and by the end, I was disappointed that there wasn't more. You captured Barbossa perfectly, so much so that I could actually hear Geoffrey Rush in my mind, speaking the lines. You kept both Barbossa and Elizabeth in character very well. I loved it! Thank you. :)
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  • From Madam_Snape on October 17, 2012
    Your story is amazing from start to finish. Barbossa and Elizabeth are my favorite POTC pairing. The tale ended so beautifully yet so sad. I do hope you continue with what happened in another story. They deserve to be happy together. Thanks once again for such a terrific read.
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  • From MissBarbs on February 25, 2012
    Ouw !! The labour are described so vivid, that i could feel Elizabeth´s pain as well. But despite of this the best and surprising scentence is Barbossas´s statement about his knowledge about goats, LOL !!
    The next part leaving the ship is a kind of bittersweet. It seems that this might be a farewell for ever and i almost believed it ! - but wasn't there something ? Yes : the fouth part of the movie, "On stranger tides" and we all know Barbossa will be the hero at the end, he will survive, he only lost the pearl again, but that doesn´t matter so much, he got an almost equvalent, the "Queen Anne´s revenge". I find the epilouge perfectly fits the gap between " In the hollow of the heart" to "On Stranger tides"... so well done !!
    I hope you will write on any other story and hope it is barbossabeth ! Thank you so much for sharing and completing this great story ! Please write more...
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  • From BethanyEllen on January 12, 2012
    Please write more! This desperately needs a sequel, their tale isn't over yet! I don't mind how long it takes, but please write a sequel!
    Always an admirer of your work. Fantastic ending!
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  • From lfuller711 on January 04, 2012
    Bonny, Thank you so much for finishing your story. But it just can't be the last word you write. You're writing is awesome and I really look forward to reading your stories. As I have said before, I can see each moment in my mind's eye. Your stories are enjoyable, wonderful, moving, enticing and very stirring. Please write more! Thank you so much for sharing with us.

    I'm sorry it took so long for me to review. I wish there was a way that I could receive an Email when the story is updated.

    Thanks! Have a great 2012!

    lfuller711
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  • From MissBarbs on July 15, 2011
    HOW COOL IS THAT, a 20 years younger crew and a 12 years old Jack Sparrow ! Oh Jack, poor Jack, ha, ha, greedy as ever ! Need to read that more than twice, what great fantasie ! That would be a good plot in the new movie, maybe with computer animation and a good mask, they could manage that !? I would like to see that...
    "The morning after" is the last part of the 3 reviews or look-backs of Hector´s and Elizabeths first encounter. I like that because it runs like a red thread through the story. Very touching scentence from Barbossa is : "Ah, lass. If that be so, then t’was a far sweeter end to me life than I deserved". I think that´s typical for Barbossa.


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  • From MissBarbs on July 13, 2011
    That was a real complicated discussion in a twisted situation: what to do with the kid ? Is he able to stay on a pirate vessel with all that dangers and is the crew able to deal with that ? Many questions to solve and all must be well considered....an authentic discussion between Hector and Elizabeth. Such discussions leads to frustration and what is the best against it: yes, that love-making-scene is fierce, short and hot ( Holy...oh dear ! nice scene ! ) that´s is how i like Hector, he is a bit ferocious... and that´s how wie love him !

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  • From MissBarbs on July 12, 2011
    It was not very kind from me that i didn´t review so long, but i´m back now and my greed for barbossabeth is bigger than ever. So here we go :
    I was completely surprised that the intruder was Bootstrap Bill Turner. I expected anyone but not Bill Turner ! I fully can understand his anger, from Bill Turners point of view his relationship to Barbossa is a bit "strained" so to say. So i must smirk when he said to Elizabeth :" Strange company you keep "....can´t stop smirking...Ha ha and the reaction of him when he find´s out that the kid is not his grandchild...priceless ! But also sad for him.
    I love this because it is a kind of reconciliation for each other, i mean Elizabeth and Bill Turner. So it is better when he takes the heart with it and Elizabeth is free now. Maybe this is a sign that she is really free without keeping that heart.

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  • From lfuller711 on June 26, 2011
    Awesome chapter - makes me want even more! Please keep writing - I love reading your fiction! Thanks for sharing!
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  • From BethanyEllen on June 01, 2011
    I'm so happy with this fic!!
    It's been one of my all time favorites, you've done a truly wonderful job.
    If you decide the story has not reached its end, I will be more than delighted to read more of Hector and Elizabeth's tale.
    Thank you for such an enjoyable read!!
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  • From lfuller711 on May 22, 2011
    I'm sorry that it has taken me so long to review this chapter of your wonderful story! I'm dieing to see the finish of this erotic epic. Thank you so much for sharing! It is a story that I will read again and again! The characters are so clear, the action in my mind's eye so fervent, the emotions and the needs of the characters so well played!

    Thanks!
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  • From BethanyEllen on April 21, 2011
    Thank you for yet another wonderful update! I can't wait for the final chapter, this has been a fantastic story!
    Don't leave the update too long please!!!
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  • From scarlett on April 20, 2011
    I hate to hear there is only one chp to go!

    I really do hope you will continue writing, we used to have so much Barbossa fic and now it is few and far between. You capture the essence of him so well and I'm always amazed that you're able to make each love scene exciting and new. And I don't know if I stated this before but I loved the flashback. I think more of this would be great in this fic or another.

    I just hope you will continue to write!!!
    The uniqueness of the character, his intensity, fearlesness, entertwined with his softer noble side makes him irresistable! I think there are a few of us out here who's enthusiasm for him has never died!

    I hope there are more stories left in you to write, even if it's with an OC. I for one can't get enough of Hector!

    Thanks again for the great writing!
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  • From BethanyEllen on April 05, 2011
    Wahey an update!! :D
    And a marvelous one at that. Thank you!
    Can't wait for more.
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  • From scarlett on March 17, 2011
    Thanks for the update.

    Can't wait for more!
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