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Reviews for In the Hollow of the Heart

By : bonnyblonde
  • From BethanyEllen on January 08, 2011
    I have only just joined this site, and your stories were the first I read. I really hope you update this story, it has real potential and I'm already hooked!! Fantastic story, keep it up.
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  • From MissBarbs on December 13, 2010
    I hesitated so long with that review because i know that my few humble words can not describe what wonderful story you have left for us !!!
    Oh my, exactly what i wanted : the first interlude between her and Hector. I read it together complete with chap. 6 and it is absolutely breathtaking hot, that i read it more than twice ! Those little conversations between Elizabeth and Hector are so sweet and amusing that i have a wide grin in my face and my cheeks are deep red like Elizabethīs cheeks as well ! Holy, that Hector is such a passionate and randy beast with a hint of gentleman, exactly how i want him !
    And now that cliffhanger...i love it, because the story goes further...
    Thank you so much for updating reguarly, what would we barbossabeth fangirlies do without those wonderful stories !!!
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  • From lfuller711 on December 10, 2010
    Bonny,

    I haven't forgotten to review - just reading from the beginning and life has been real busy! I'm trying to plan the perfect time (alone) to read Barbossa & Elizabeth's first time! Thanks for being so responsive and writing it for us! I'll review as soon I read the latest chapter.

    Thanks!

    Lynne
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  • From on October 18, 2010
    I love Barbossabeth. It's not a conventional or cannon ship, but it just works so well. Barbossa and Elizabeth have such chemisty. This was really well written and it felt like I was watching a movie in my head, a very hot movie ;) Thank you.
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  • From Bethster7 on October 17, 2010
    Ohhh my *falls over in dribble puddle*. Congrats BonnyBlondeLass, this story is rather spectacular. Lovely POV from Elizabeth. Characterisation is very believable, plot is awesome and it's hot as hell. Your descriptive language is godly. This has to be one of the best Barbossa/Elizabeth fics on here ... or one of the best POTC fics here, no doubt. Thanks for uploading this treasure. Now I shall continue imagining Hector humming in a bath tub.
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  • From MissBarbs on September 12, 2010
    as Ifuller 711 said, it would be thrilling, too, to finish the first encounter between Barbossa and Elizabeth, that one in chapt. 6 before the battle on shipwreck - island, where he says : “Fer tonight at least, ye be mine alone.” Iīm really greedy for more and that encounter would be VERY interesting, as well !


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  • From lfuller711 on September 10, 2010
    Wow! What a story! Thanks for posting more! I really enjoyed reading - so passionate, so strong. As always, I can see every moment.

    Can you write the scene where Elizabeth and Barbossa originally are together intimately? That would be really thrilling also!

    Please keep posting more in either or both time lines!

    Thanks again for sharing!

    Lynne
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  • From MissBarbs on August 28, 2010
    Wow...where should i begin ? It is long, it is hot - it is so damned good, that iīm speechless. Itīs so very detailed but also sensitive, not only pure sex. Itīs an interesting style-element you added, that the story often changes from the present to the past, with hints of what happend between Hector and Elizabeth, when they had their first night together. And it is a really long chapter with a long and not common foreplay... YESS !! Finally somebody wrote about a bound Hector...what a nice and thrilling imagination ! Last but not least your story is completely brilliant formulated, as ever. It was really worth to wait so long for ! One of the rare gripping barbossabeth -love scenes, thank you so much !... now under a cold shower....

    Conni
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  • From captnrommie on August 21, 2010
    Holy... 0_0
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  • From captnrommie on July 08, 2010
    Great story so far, though I must ask please continue!
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  • From lfuller711 on May 31, 2010
    Bonny,

    I'm so sorry that I haven't responded before now, but I just realized that you had posted another chapter. Brilliant as always and makes me want more. I could see every action in my mind's eye. I can see why Elizabeth feels so strangely about Barbossa's transformation, I would feel the same way. I'm glad she was able to accept him this way too!

    Please publish more!

    Is there a way to alert your readers when a new chapter is posted? I used to find out through Barbossabeth...

    Thanks again!

    Lynne
    Las Vegas, NV
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  • From MissBarbs on May 01, 2010
    Arrrrr! A little cliffhanger ! But it is a good introduction for the next chapter. I expected that youīll describe that particular "meeting" happened in the past between Elizabeth and Barbossa one day bevor the battle. ( I hope you donīt want withhold it ? ) I was also a bit sad, when Barbossa suddently changed his appearance after drinking from the water of the fountain of youth... it was so great because i really felt the same like Elizabeth ! But Barbossa is right, he follows his own goal. It was a deep desire for him to stay young, you saw it in the 3rd movie, when he told the crew from that fountain. And it is even better for his little son ! It would be very interesting to know HOW he found that fountain...*smile* maybe a next plot bunnie ? I like this chap, Hector is sexy as ever and brilliant written as well !!!
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  • From lfuller711 on March 17, 2010
    Bonny,

    I love this story! You have written the characters so thoroughly. Each twist of a phrase, each thought beautifully portrays Elizabeth and Barbossa. The language and intonations of the characters are portrayed true. I had to read many of the sentences over again because they were so beautifully written and so mature (not the naughty kind of mature) in nature. To tell the truth, I can hardly wait till there are more mature themes too, because you write them so well also.

    Please keep writing - can hardly wait!

    A fan indeed!

    lfuller711


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  • From MissBarbs on March 15, 2010
    o_O...you left me speechless, this was HOT. And this promise sounds really lovely... especially for the next chapter !
    Great written as ever, amazing how you build up the conversation between those two and how that situation changed suddenly at the end. Itīs thrilling how Hector is able to restrain his desire... even itīs only for a short time...!
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  • From lfuller711 on February 06, 2010
    BonnyBlondeLass,

    I hope you haven't given up on this story. I love your writing and want to read more. I also appreciate the direction this story was going in. Hang in there!

    Lynne
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