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Reviews for Lines

By : CGH
  • From IceCat83 on January 04, 2010
    Great story. I've read your older ones some time ago and I kept my fingers crossed hoping for more. Love the pairing of Optimus and Mikaela and your writting style brings a smile to whomever reads your stories. Again, I hope to be reading more of your fiction in the year to come ( "gently nudges your plot bunny to start multiplying" )
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  • From CatDeChanis on December 31, 2009
    Ha, I just noticed - yay me for review cherries.
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  • From CatDeChanis on December 31, 2009
    I just ate this fic and the shorts you wrote before and after it in a couple of hours, and all I can say is "MORE!! FIC EATER WANT MORE!!" Speaking as someone who actually knows a person who was left in a similar situation to Mikaela (not me, but the person was close enough to me that I ready to help her hide the fucker's body and take a piss over his unmarked grave), I found your explanations reasonably believable and well-written, although you did skim over the fact that as a minor(?) Mikaela could have sought help from the state government. I would love to see you do something to help Bumblebee - in the movies, Sam fought Simmons because he believed that the Transformers were people just like humans, so I can't quite see him remaining as prejudicial and as insensitive as he currently is, though it certainly suited your story - and you're right, a boy Sam's age wouldn't be willing or ready for this responsibility - but by that same point, how are his parents able to afford sending him to such an expensive school? Clearly his family is receiving money from the government, or Sam is being given a scholarship through the government. Mikaela drove Bumblebee through Mission City and saved a ton of soldiers' asses - maybe Will should remember that. I'm still curious as to whether or not she is getting anything from the government herself - besides Optimus' gentlemanly help. I hope you choose to continue this series. I truly enjoy your writing style, and I am particularly happy to find a writer of such skill in a fandom that is relatively young (though I certainly adore it). Thank you for posting, and I look forward to reading anything you write in the future.
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