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Reviews for Becoming Prime

By : GabrielC
  • From TwilightNaiad on October 05, 2009
    Well that certainly explains a lot about Optimus and Ironhide. Excellent story, I am glad you wrote it. You certainly write the characters well. Hope to see another from you again.
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  • From darkswordjedi on October 01, 2009
    excellent story!! LOVED it!!!! needs one last chapter, an epilogue, maybe?
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  • From swordqueen on October 01, 2009
    Poor Optimus! He's been through a lot of stuff in this story that will have repercussions throughout his life. Megatron is creepy and Soundwave is just...icky! Lots of tension and conflict in this story--well done!
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  • From TwilightNaiad on September 27, 2009
    Ahh! Cliffhanger! Now I really want to know what happens. Ironhide why can't you control your temper?! I wonder how Optimus will handle this.
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  • From TwilightNaiad on September 26, 2009
    Excellent chapter. I love the way you wrote Ironhide. The interactions between him and Optimus seemed so natural. Keep up the good work.
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  • From TwilightNaiad on September 25, 2009
    Excellent. We finally get to meet Ironhide. Optimus needs someone like Ironhide to show him how to fight and also someone who can see what Megatron really is like.
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  • From TwilightNaiad on September 24, 2009
    Hmm...so if Megatron approached him differently, maybe Optimus would have accepted him. Good filler chapter, keep up the good writing.
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  • From TwilightNaiad on September 23, 2009
    Wow, it certainly was a dark sad chapter. You wrote the physically and psychological aspects of the two very well. I want to see where this goes and what the consequences will be. Good job with the chapter.
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  • From TwilightNaiad on September 22, 2009
    I was wondering how Optimus was shown how to inflict punishment. Will Megatron go too far in that Optimus learned where to draw the line with Ironhide? I can see Optimus being a naive, innocent bot; but where did Megatron get all his darkness from? I would like if you could explain that a little bit. Even though this will probably get really dark, I enjoy your writing and look forward to another excellent story.
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