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Reviews for All Good Things Come to Those Who Wait

By : torturequeen06
  • From ginstar3 on January 05, 2010
    As always you live up to your pen name...pouting...Oh well it gives me a good excuse (not that I need one) to start over and re-read your fic from the beginning...lolz...ps this story is cool-as-shit
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  • From ANON - Harbingerofd00m on December 24, 2009
    I laughed so hard I cried at the "frozen butter" bit. :D
    NEED MOAR!!! This is good stuff, keep it up!
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  • From DeathGodDist on November 27, 2009
    Wow, pure kickass chapter. I love it!

    Yeah, the "stick of butter" line had me on the floor in tears. Your writing is so awesome, the humor and all the little details you put into it, I feel like I'm repeating myself a little, is just amazing. With all the revelations this chapter, I actually went back and checked in the previous chapter to see if I could identify anything about Hamilton that would have given away his secret. Yeah, the new revelations this chapter were pretty awesome. What I loved most about them was they didn't feel like you had just made them up on the spot and added them in at the last minute. You did a great job describing the new guests and connecting them to Jack. Jack really must be something else in battle if she took out their assasination squad and then all the Xeno's.

    Hope the big guy is ok. Jack needs to spend more time with him. They've kind of been in their own worlds so far not really interacting with each other ever since their littlt fight. Should be interesting to see what the repercusions of his injuries are.

    So yeah, simply amazing. I'm so excited to see where it all is heading! :)

    -DGD
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  • From ginstar3 on November 24, 2009
    A stick of butter...Was it frozen?...I laughed my fucking ASS off...that was so fucking funny I can't even tell you. Another fucking awesome chapter that has left me panting for air. Oh noes..poor Trunks,but he's a tough piece of Yautja jerky. By the way, when the hell is Jack going to ask Trunks what his real name is. If you need any suggestions let me know..I seem to be able to come up with 100 Yautja names and -6,000 when it comes to humans...lolz.=D Hail oh reining Queen of torture!!!!!
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  • From ginstar3 on November 24, 2009
    OM F'in G. that was coooool. Heart-pounding action...I loves it. I had to read it twice because the excitement was making me read too fast...lolz. I love the part about him playing with the treadmill...that was actually incredibly cute. My favorite part was when she discovered that he was holding back during their fight and he snapped the guys neck with one hand...fucking awesome. I loves the plot. I bow to you, Oh shiny, sparkley one...and yes you are definitely a Torture Queen. I want more...yes, we needs it precious.
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  • From bloodravyn on November 22, 2009
    kickassfulness to the max!
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  • From DeathGodDist on October 17, 2009
    Simply amazing! I cannot don't think words will be enough to express just how awesome your writing is! I had to read the chapter a few times actually because each time I read over something I had missed or encountered a little detail that I had glanced over before but understood it now.

    Again, I am just in awe of how detailed your storytelling is, ever scene that you write is so full of description that I can easily picture it in my mind playing out. The pacing is also great, it doesn't feel rushed and it's not dragging either. I loved in this latest chapter how you went through writing about the experience of being in captivity and how they're reacting to it. I love how Jack keeps being in awe of Trunks and how she learned not to piss him off because of how easily he could kill her. And I enjoy all the humerous bits you throw in there, especially of Trunks getting pissed off and hurting someone.

    The scene at the end is definitely cool and mysterious. Meeting Trunk's brother who Jack has met before (briefly) and how he doesn't seem concerned about Trunk's captivity. I guess there is more going on here than is known, for it makes sense that Trunks has seemed that he's been holding back a lot in the face of the abuse he has taken. Now, he apparently considers Jack a "valuable asset" for some reason too. Wonder what that is? Can't wait to find out!

    Again, amazing writing and a great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next and who the "guests" are.

    -DGD
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  • From bloodravyn on October 11, 2009
    ooooh, i cannot wait for the next one!
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  • From bloodravyn on September 17, 2009
    oooh, i was so hoping she would manage to kill the general!
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  • From DeathGodDist on September 16, 2009
    Wow! Ok, you got me hooked. I simply loved the way this chapter was structured. The opening paragraphs were perfect with the descriptions about Jack given from the person who'd know her best, her brother and served greatly to give the reader a good understanding of her and her background. I also love the whole relationship you've build between the family members and how they view one-another and themselves. I like how Ashley is incredibly complex, someone who understands his own weaknesses and believes himself to be good, when he most certainly is not, especially with the revelations this chapter, even though he does seem to somewhat genuinly care for his sister, or at least he thinks he does.

    Heh, so Jack had to go and pick a fight huh? This should be very interesting, though I can't imagine they'd let them get far since they don't want them to be harmed to badly. And how on earth are they going to implement this "breeding" program? :)

    Anyway, congrats, again you've gotten me hooked. The detail in your writing is very impressive and I definitely feel that I can picture the events in my head as I read them. I honestly did not notice many problems with spelling or other errors in this chapter and it all looked good to me. Perhaps there were a few but again, I honestly did not take note of them. Bravo!

    -DGD
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  • From ANON - Shadowdog85 on September 16, 2009
    Nice! I can't wait to read their fight! Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Shadowdog85 on September 13, 2009
    I like this story, I'm interested in where it's going and I like how you have a point of view for the predator, please update soon.
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  • From swordqueen on September 11, 2009
    This is off to a very exciting start! I can't wait for you to continue it!
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  • From DeathGodDist on September 11, 2009
    Great first chapter for your first story in the Predator fanfic world. I'm already liking your characters and how they are related to one another. At first I was confused, but then I enjoyed the little twist with the names for "Jack" and "Ashley". But I gotta admit, Jack sounds pretty tough. Heh, nice Pred nickname "Trunks" too, I'm interested in learning his story as well.

    All in all, great start. I will definitely be reading more should more come. :)

    -DGD
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  • From ginstar3 on September 10, 2009
    Excellent start on your first fic...welcome to the club. The flow of your story is excellent, as well as length (word count). You do have a shit load of typos which were kind of hard to wade through. Other than that, the story is very interesting and I love the details. I love the names and nicknames too.
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