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Reviews for All Good Things Come to Those Who Wait

By : torturequeen06
  • From LadyOfDaGame on January 08, 2011
    *shakes head sadly*
    "Damn!"
    Last part is what got me she really was not thinking when she picked that fight
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  • From LadyOfDaGame on January 08, 2011
    damn good start to it I like the way things are playing out the tension between these three family members is just surreal can't wait to read what happens in the next chap
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  • From bloodravyn on November 09, 2010
    wow, this just keeps getting more and more interesting!
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  • From screaminxninja on July 02, 2010
    I really like the detail you use and how you the take time to point out and explain each individual thing that is happening in every chapter. You're really good at that and its weird. But i like it. =]
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  • From speachestx on June 29, 2010
    eeek!~ I want more please oh please!
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  • From ANON - Cyrosian on May 23, 2010
    9/10 for this story as a whole(thus far). I wish you had time to update more often though *sniffles*, it would make my day so much better.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 27, 2010
    It seems I have been waiting forever for another chapter from you on this story and you certainly didnt disaapoint me at all! I would have loved more B'raush/Jack time but thats just me! lol
    P.S. I want a snowball fight. haha

    Update please
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  • From ANON - Harbingerofd00m on April 12, 2010
    Another great chapter, good to see she finally found out Trunks' name. Hope you update soon, I'm hooked like an addict!
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  • From ginstar3 on April 11, 2010
    SNOWBALL FIGHT !!!!!!!!!!Please, please, please!!!!
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  • From memellowchick on April 10, 2010
    OH NOOOO JACK! lol I love this story so far
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  • From speachestx on March 06, 2010
    I like the whole ensamble you have in the story. I want more!
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  • From ANON - Harbingerofd00m on March 05, 2010
    MOAR!!! :D

    This is good stuff, keep up the good work! If I was Jack, I'd sabotage the base as I was escaping. The thought that her family is doing nothing about her being used as a lab rat (and the General planning on letting Trunks rape her) sickens me. Ashley seriously needs to grow a pair and pop a cap into the General's forehead! I suppose all the evil stuff just makes the ending seem that much better. Unless you're making this a tragedy, which I hope not! :(
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  • From ANON - Ginstar3 on March 01, 2010
    Trunks speaks...how epic is that!!!! why did he rip up all her clothes and then tell her to clean up the room? Was he pissed she invaded his space? Or did she steal his bed? lolz...thanks sooooo much for the cliffie. Aaarggghhh...face palm. I can't wait for him to tell her his real name so Jack can continue calling him Trunks just to spite him *snicker* Keep them chappys comin' can't wait to see what's gonna happen next.
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  • From flamekaat on February 16, 2010
    I am glad you did not fall off the face of the earth. For a while it seemed that you did and the death of this story before its completion would have made me sad. Good work and I look forward to future updates.
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  • From DeathGodDist on January 06, 2010
    I am actually very proud of you. It takes guts to go back and start over on something that you worked on, especially if you feel in your heart that it's the right thing to do, even though it was finished and could have been left alone.

    I hope you don't take this the wrong way, but I very much agree with your decision. I did feel that the chapter as it was, just felt way way too rushed. It seemed so out of place given how you've spent a great deal of time with the exposition up to this point, to have everything end so suddenly like that. I was waiting for the next chapter before writing another review just to see how you were going to continue things because it felt as though the story was getting off track a little too.

    Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing your true chapter 5 and how it will differ from what you had put up before. I do enjoy this story very much and can't wait to read more.

    -DGD
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