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Reviews for Coming clean

By : swordqueen
  • From ANON - Natalie on October 09, 2009
    When Barricade told he that he wouldn't be gentile... Just... *Guh*. I... am way too much of a Xeno sub. Seriously. It's sad.

    I'm still loving June; I see so much of myself in her. (After the "Neat! It's blue!" line from the last chapter, how can anyone *not* lover her?)

    “You want trust?” This is me. This is who I am. The disgusting pervert. All of it."
    “...Oh my god that is so hot.”

    ^
    That's just such a "me" thing to say. I love June.
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  • From ANON - Thornwitch on October 05, 2009
    I think what I like most about this is that we have a confident older woman, not a teenybopper, and that it's the 'bots who are the puritanical ones. Even the Decepticons. Also, their interface equipment actually kind of makes sense.
    Also, the characterizations are a lot stronger than you usually see in PWP stories. Me like.
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  • From ANON - Thornwitch on October 03, 2009
    Wow, a non-icky human-decepticon lemon! I hardly thought it was possible. And both characters have really believable personalities! And the woman isn't a teenager! Hurrah!
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  • From aniay on August 30, 2009
    OMG, I almost came. You write your stories in a way that alows the reader to feel like the main character. You make it perversely hot.
    I'm really glad you decided to post your fics.
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