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Reviews for Xeno

By : swordqueen
  • From Tenjp on August 06, 2018

    I just read all of these. They are amazing, YOU Are amazing. If you ever check this anymore, know that you are appreciated and your talented is outstandig. I wish poor barricade had been able to blend his spark with June, I like to think they did :) If you ever get the urge to write, I will so be here to read it :) THANK YOU THANK YOU


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  • From Sincerity4reel on April 16, 2011
    Damn, I've just completed all 22 chapters in under an hour, okay maybe it was longer because some parts literally made my jaw drop (in a good way). I have read a lot of Transformer fiction, and this is by far the crown jewel of them all. This will be one I'll keep coming back to, even if it's not updated anymore. Love, love, love it.
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  • From AlabasterPrincess on January 02, 2011
    Just wanted to let you know how much I love this series, and the offshoot series too! I will never think about robots the same way again thanks to you! :P Hope to see more of this series one day. :D
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  • From Juliesan on October 29, 2010
    Musashi...I love you!!! Your awesome xeno stories have inspired me to write. I love the relationships between your characters and how they each have their own emotional baggage. Makes for a more interesting story ;) Absolutely love love love Barricade/June. Best pairing ever! I love each of your chapters, but one and two where they were learning? OH GAWD! Dominant Barricade does naughty things to my mind ^_^; Makes me wish my husband wasn't off in army basic so I could deal with this, uh, issue lol. I love your other movieverse story, Sky and Ground, but Xeno needs love! (reCAPTCHA says-renewal intimacy XD)

    Now, I have a request. May I use your style of Cybertronian/Human interface? I wanted to ask first since you're the only author I've ever seen use this method. It's the most feasible I've seen and ridiculously HOT!!!

    Love all of your stories, keep up the amazing work!
    RAM
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  • From ebonykain on October 28, 2010
    this was FABULOUS
    I hope that this isn't the end of this. It's just glorious!
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  • From XenophobicDoll on July 24, 2010
    “You could break my celibacy reputation, and my monogamy, you know,”

    .... Awwww poor June =( I really hope Cade was just trying to be a jerk and fluster Jennifer when he said that, and didn't really mean it. Totally into the stories by the way. June is my fave =)
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  • From padawanjinx on June 14, 2010
    Okay, I tried looking for PRISONER on ff.net and theres over 60 entries. I wanted to read the back story about the scar on Jennifer's chest. *pouts* Is the story still up there or was I just missing it?

    PJ
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  • From padawanjinx on June 08, 2010
    I just wanted to say how much I have enjoyed your stories. I have been so moved, I find myself revisiting stories because certain parts stick in my head and just drive me nuts. My mind was perfectly lopsided and then I ran across your Xeno stories.... all I can say is... DAMN! I certainly hope you plan to continue all those arcs, and quite possibly expand more on your take of their universe/ interpersonal relationships.

    I hope this reviews posts, considering all the trouble I've went through just to be considered a 'member' and have the privelege to comment. But I think with your stories, it was worth the hassle. :D

    Keep up the excellent work!

    PJ
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  • From Draiconovix on May 26, 2010
    All I can saw after reading this chapter is 'Awwwwwwwwwwwwww :)' It's very cute and I love it and cant wait till your next update.
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  • From flamekaat on February 05, 2010
    OMG! I am so happy. Trifecta of awesome! Part one, Putting all your other bits into one piece,Awesome! Part two getting a friend to start writing Transformers pron for your present, AWESOMER! Part three, sharing your annon friend's work with us, well thats the AWESOMEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(Snerk of the moment is one of my captcha words is targeted *sniggers*)
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  • From ANON - Natalie on October 09, 2009
    Okay, so I generally wait until I've finished a story before I review it, so here I am! I absolutely love your works. I normally get bored with OC stories, the characters usually don't interest me terribly. June, however, (and Jennifer too, but I'll get to her later) actually makes me want to keep reading. I really like her. She and Barricade are a very odd, but very cute couple. The only problem I have with June is not so much a character thing as that in the way she speaks and acts seems to be much younger than how old she's described later on in the story. I read her as being late college/early university age, but then I found out she's actually a professor. Kinda threw me through a loop there. I think the way you've written Transformer!sex is probably the most realistic out of the many, many ideas I've read in other fics. You've clearly put a lot of thought into that aspect of your writing and it's definitely paid off.

    So, things I would like to see... I would love it if there was a master link with all the stories as chapters, it's getting a bit annoying piecing together the timeline on my own. You mentioned that you'd written a story about how Jennifer and Starscream meet; I'd love to read it. I think it should be included if you make a listing for this story. I would also love to see a story about how Barricade and June met; partly because I think it would be really interesting and mainly because I cannot get enough of those two.

    The only real criticism I have for your stories (because I absolutely LOVE you as a writer!) is that you tend to leave off the pronouns in your dialog. While some people do clip their sentences sometimes when they speak, not everyone talks like Rorschach. It's getting annoying. That one little tidbit aside, you're doing a wonderful job and I hope you never stop writing this story! :)
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