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Reviews for Gelflings quest

By : englishwitch2003
  • From KiraJenLove on March 11, 2010
    Mmmm, that's good sex! ;)
    Although you had some typos in there (who the heck is "Alice"?), I still enjoyed reading it. There was one little hole in your story in that as he was running his hands up and down her back, he would have discovered her wings. Most people overlook that when writing a Jen/Kira shipper sex story. I try to write the wings into my stories.
    Also, when describing his cock, since Gelflings are only about 3-4 feet high, I would think 8" would be pretty unrealistic, but 4-5" for someone that height would be more than sufficient. Another point is that Jen is very likely uncircumcised. They don't have Jews on Thra, and these are all "natural" peoples, so he would likely have the same penis he was born with, so you might describe his little hoodie.
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  • From AngelMeiru on September 25, 2009
    Cute lemon. I notice not too many people come to this site as much as they used. Probably because the teenage fangirls lie about their age, so they can spam the site with crappy out of character yaoi fanfics. And the good writers are the ones that end up suffering.

    In other words, good work. Keep on writing.
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