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Reviews for Learning Human Nature

By : almosteight
  • From gokusgirl on July 13, 2009
    Awesomeness. This was a wonderfully written story! Thanks for sharing!
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  • From gokusgirl on July 13, 2009
    I criged at this line:

    “It is quite pleasurable for me. I have never experienced this sensation of warmth which seems to be running through my entire body. I am becoming sexually aroused.”

    Uh..wow. It wouold sound like something Spock would say if you took the word 'sexually' out. Maybe the entire last line...I don't know...it just sounded really cornball. @_@

    But overall, I'm really liking your writing style...I just had to stop reading and make a quick comment. :D
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