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Reviews for Sacrifice

By : Raythe
  • From ANON - iluvmyterrier on June 01, 2009
    Chapter 3:

    Thanks for the fast update! I get so crazy when I find a story that I luv like this one and then I go and get hooked on it but then the author never updates again after drawing me in. *** sends you a big hug for updating so quickly ***

    WOW, I didn't see that coming.... so Raines wanted Jim to kill somebody when he was just a 16 yr old kid?.... and worse seduced him... that wasn't what I expected... was that kind of like stolkholms syndrome (sp.?)

    I just thought maybe Jim had rejected him, maybe embarrased his ego and put him in his place. Then Raines would want to own him body and soul. The story summary mentioned Jim rejected his advances when he was just a teen so I didn't expect that little surprise.

    This was really a great chapter. You nailed it from Spock's POV too.

    I still can't wait to see what else Raines wants Jim to do for him.

    Onward ho! Update chapter 4 soon, PLEASE.

    I can't wait until you introduce Raines and we see his POV.

    Poor Spock!

    Angsty Jim!

    Snarky Bones!

    I love them!
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  • From ANON - StuffToDo on May 31, 2009
    OMG I can't stop giggling...Preserving Jim's dignity! Okay...okay..it was awesome please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Lina on May 31, 2009
    THATS IT!!!! You just left me with an evil cliffie!!!!!!!! OMG! Please update this story ASAP SOON PRONTO AHORA!!!!! PLEASE!! oooo, and i hope Spock is going to be ontop of jim!!??? hmmmm!
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  • From ANON - Belladonna on May 30, 2009
    This is shaping up very nicely! Your portrayals of the three gentlemen have been excellent thus far, even with the touchy business of Spock and strong emotion. I'm eager to see where you move next, and how much you can work into the story with such a tight timeline right off the plate. Eager for chapter three and beyond.
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  • From ANON - Viper on May 30, 2009
    SWEET! I am dieing to see what happens next! Spock is just to cute! and I love that Jim is clueless!
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  • From Vally on May 29, 2009
    Beautiful as always! I love the possessiveness you gave Spock. It does actually make a lot of sense for the Vulcans to be possessive by nature, they were passionate warriors after all before the whole Logic thing... But yeah, can't wait to meet Lord Raines and see how close Spock gets to killing him! The future is looking exciting indeed! Just don't get to caught up in this awesomeness, I'm still anxiously awaiting for an update on Forbidden too! Meh, I'll take any updates from you though, it's all just too good!!
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  • From ANON - iluvmyterrier on May 29, 2009
    Oh my gosh! I luv this story so much. I can't wait to find out what happens when Lord Damascus Raines makes an appearance. Please keep this story going because I would be disappointed if you didn't. I love a jealous/possessive Spock. I am looking forward to seeing what happens next. Update soon. Okay. I want to see some angst for Jim and an angry Vulcan coming to his rescue.
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  • From ANON - M.Bomar on May 29, 2009
    I was beside myself with happiness that you'd updated so quickly! This is sadly something I find to be quite a challenge myself. At any rate, OOC or otherwise, I really do love a possessive Spock! Though I'm torn about the obliviousness of Kirk, as part of me screams he is a genius and should be more than used to the idea of people finding him attractive thus he should realize Spock, in his own way, is trying to lay some kind of tentative stake of interest in him but at the same time I can understand that maybe he's simply oblivious because he's not expecting that sort of reaction out of Spock even if he does want it. But part of me still says that if he was hoping for the half-Vulcan to return his feelings then he'd have to be looking for tiny signals to go off of and notice that Spock is throwing out huge ones. Oh well, either way, I like this quite a bit and am looking forward to more possessive Spock! There's nothing quite as hot as a hot and bothered and jealous Vulcan! And McCoy's so... well McCoy!

    Again, the writing was brilliant! I'm waiting for the next installment with bated breath!
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  • From ANON - Blue on May 29, 2009
    Great chapter! The shower part was great! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From LadyDraculea on May 28, 2009
    Pardon my French, but jesus fucking christ, you live! It's unbelievably good to see that you haven't fallen into orbit. And you've returned to us with a goodie! I love it. I have yet to see the new movie, but I will be soon, me thinks. Everything looks wonderful, as usual, though the chapter seems to have been pasted twice?

    Anyways, glad to see you around.

    Lady D
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  • From ANON - Blue on May 28, 2009
    That was great! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - M.Bomar on May 27, 2009
    I saw this first on FF.net but I felt that I'd rather review here seeing as you'll likely get more reviews on that site than this one. So far this is interesting and well written. Any mistakes that there might have been in grammar or spelling I skipped right over, so either I was too in engrossed in where you were going with this or they just didn't stand out screaming at me like that sort of thing usually does. It's too short for me to give a true opinion on other than it was good but I'm looking forward to more so that I can get a better feel both for the story and your writing style. But in the short term let me say that I feel thus far your characterizations are well done in terms of the worrying mother-hen McCoy and eternally quietly curious Spock... Although, maybe Kirk is just a touch too bashful – especially with the ducking of his head thing. Typically speaking, he's pretty brash and even a touch narcissistic but this is your story and if that bit of OOC serves your purposes then go for it. Please continue with this. I’d very much like to read more.

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