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By : Raythe
  • From ANON - blue bird on June 26, 2009
    I was so happy to see the new chapter! Great job! Poor Jim! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From BlueBlaze25 on June 26, 2009
    I wasn't having a good day, but then I saw that you updated and by the end of the chapter, I felt so much better. So, thank you very much.

    I love how subtle everything is. Nothing world-shattering has really happened, nothing action-movie like, you know? And yet, it's all these little things that really make this story. The slight arch of an eyebrow, the ever-so-softly brush of a hand; it's these details that are amazing, and I know when I reread this story, which I know I will, I'll notice things I didn't the first time. These little things keep building, slowly adding to the plot, giving it those fine intricacies that's going to build to something world-shattering, perhaps action-movie like, or at the very least a deep storyline that will change all these characters.

    If I wasn't hooked by chapter one, I know for sure I am now. Keep it up.
    ~Blue
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  • From LadyDraculea on June 25, 2009
    Well,fuck.

    What happened to not leaving Jim's side, Spock? DDD:
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  • From ANON - Blue Bird on June 20, 2009
    Great Job! I can't wait to see what Spock and Bones do to keep Jim safe! I love over-protective Spock!
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  • From ANON - fangbaby2002 on June 17, 2009
    Another fantastic chapter. I loved all the fluffy romance. I love how Jim is with spock. Some people mentioned that he seemed out of character, but even a normally confident person can be shy around someone they truly care about. Whose opinion matters to them. Its nice to see a different side of the jim we all know and love. Bones is just spot on. Love the possesive Spock. Loved the long chapter. Cant wait for the next one.
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  • From LadyDraculea on June 16, 2009
    Oh gawd, you have no idea how much I simply love you.

    I just got home from seeing Star Trek (for the second time) only to find that you've updated! I've had the most tantalizing time reading this chapter, the characters' voices in my head perfectly, while picturing everything that was happening clearly. Oh, how I loved when Jim nuzzled Spock's hand. I absolutely love the fact that Vulcan's hands are so sensitive, and when Jim isn't aware of it. Teasing touches and kisses. Heh, I'm completely ecstatic.

    As you, no doubt, are perfectly aware, I adore your writing. I find that your characterizations of every one that you write to be pretty much spot you. You weedle inside their heads and make them into something more than what we see on the big screen, or little screen in case of TOS.

    I must sound like a crazed fangirl. I'm just buzzing with excitement and anticipation. I sincerely hope that you won't leave us hanging for long in regards to a following chapter. I check multiple times a day as it is.

    Though, at the time when I first read this, I hadn't yet seen the new movie, but it certainly encouraged me to do so. Every since I've been nearly inhaling every Spock/Kirk I can get my hands, or eyes rather, on. I always look forward to an update from you the most, though, because I am so familiar with your incredible writing and know that you are able to deliver such wonderfully steamy and detailed scenes. I'm hooked, dahling. ;)

    Until next time,
    Lady D


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  • From ANON - Anon on June 12, 2009
    I beyond love this story
    you capture spock's thinking very well
    please please update quickly!
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  • From JohansLover on June 10, 2009
    I really like this story. I think you portray these characters really well, makes me jealous. Can Bones and Spock be able to protect Jim against Raines?
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  • From BlueBlaze25 on June 09, 2009
    First of all, long time fan of your work, and this piece still has that charm. I love how each character has his own clear, distinct voice, even the minor characters. Just with the words and tone, I can easily tell who's talking and who's POV it is. The pacing is also beautifully done; telling the whole past incident could have been an incredibly long monologue, but the way you did it, breaking it up with character reactions and musing, was very well done, and showed more of the character quirks. The angst, while definitely present, isn't overbearing, and is broken by brief moments of humor or something else that made me grin, so bravo on that.
    I can only imagine what's gonna happen next, and I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for what's to come. Keep up the amazing work.
    ~Blue
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  • From ANON - Fangbaby2002 on June 07, 2009
    Love the story. I think your doing very well with the characters. I love how protective and possesive Spock is being. I also enjoyed how you brought up the Pon Farr. Take good care of your Jim. I like him. But, I guess if anything bad happens Spock will just have to kiss him and make it all better.
    Fang
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  • From LadyDraculea on June 06, 2009
    I just have to pass this along: http://i42.tinypic.com/28wkub6.jpg And why yes, that is the man who plays Spock.

    You're welcome~

    Lady D
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  • From ANON - sunflowerseed on June 05, 2009
    Oh my gosh, pls update soon. I have to find out what happens with Jim.

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  • From spooksies on June 05, 2009
    O.O holy crap!!


    got anymore? ~_^

    miko
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  • From ANON - Lina on June 02, 2009
    Only one chapter!!!!!????? AH! Your teasing me!!!!!!!! but thanx so much for the update!!!!!
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  • From ruleroftravels on June 02, 2009
    OH
    MY
    GOODNESS
    This is AMAZING. First the insanely epic Star Wars "Forbidden", and now this gorgeous new Star Trek 2009 fic? Gaahhh you are a genius. How can you create such wonderful stories? They are perfect. The best EVER. By far.
    You own EVERYTHING. o.o


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