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Reviews for LORI'S NIGHTMARE

By : fnxmoon2
  • From Ticklefeind on February 07, 2018

    Nice story! I hope Lori and Will get their revenge. 


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  • From LadyAura on June 08, 2010
    AWESOMENESS!!! love this story and i'm so happy that i found a true hardcore freddy lover like i and please update soon!!!
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  • From zariva on June 07, 2010
    OMG, I LOVE you! I had a hard exams day today and coming home to find you updated was a great reward! ^_^ 
    And you again picked a song that I think fits Freddy (and Lori's relationship with him) perfectly!

    I get why were a little nervouse about this chapter, things can get awkward easely when a story is at the point where the victim comes to Freddy willingly. Most writers make the mistake to "soften him up" at that point (simply to keep their female character alive, perhaps o_O) but I'm glad to say you DIDN'T!
    You let him be as cruel and vile as he's meant to be and yet still managed to describe Lori's "feelings" for him in a way that makes them believable.   

    I'm also really intuiged what it was that threw Freddy so off kilter so apprubtly... The strawberry smell of her shompoo? And if yes, what did it remind him of? Some thing from the time he waas alive or a former victim, or both? (It must be odd enough that Lori (assumebly short for Loretta?) shares her name with his late wife.

    "Or I will take everything from you....in one....swift....thrust..."
    That's got to be my favorite sentence so far! So dark and brutal and yet such perfectly lustful imegary! 


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  • From Shyann on June 06, 2010
    Ohhh Yessss...I love this story can't wait for more.
    She's pregnant with freddy's son.
    Thats one kid that she better bottle feed. hehehehee..
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  • From DarkLover on June 06, 2010
    O________O

    HOLY SHIT!!!! Write more more more more more more! This is amazing!
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  • From Shyann on June 05, 2010
    Really great hope someone become a proud poppa soon... ;)
    I wonder what Freddy would be like as a father.
    Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From zariva on May 30, 2010
    Hey, don't forget about us! I'm sure the people here at adultfanfiction.net want to read your updates, too! They're definitely worth it!
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  • From Shyann on May 12, 2010
    Oh No...She's carring Freddy's baby. Heheheheeee can't wait for more soon..
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  • From zariva on May 11, 2010
    This was great!
    I'm so glad you decided to post again! Yay! ^_^
    Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From zariva on May 09, 2010
    This is great! Please post more soon! I can hardly wait! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Hyperion on July 22, 2009
    This was an awesome story. It is the most logical from Freddy movies in my opinion. Lori was hot. It's natural Freddy would want her for more. There needs to be another chapter though. Sometime in the future, where Lori fulfills Freddy's propechy and becomes his slave. Besides, there is a preg tag. This would be an interesting plot twist. Lori getting pregnant in the dream world, and it carrying over to real life.
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  • From pmad on April 01, 2009
    You have this on ff.net don't you? I loved it then and I still do now. It was a fantastic read. Bravo! :)
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  • From anacsadder on March 29, 2009
    Wow. I can't believe it took someone so long to get around to writing this scene. It was all I thought about for a couple weeks after Freddy vs Jason. Glad someone finally did, and that was a pretty good job, too (I spotted a couple of grammatical errors, but nothing too bad).
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