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Reviews for Jack's Descent

By : blood-and-lust-87
  • From blood-and-lust-87 on July 17, 2010
    ~~~The final chapter has been fixed!! Thanks for pointing that out!~~~
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  • From phantomphan07 on July 05, 2010
    Um... grr. I can't read the last chapter! Did something happen to it? :(
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  • From ANON - Jenny on August 05, 2009
    I think there's something wrong with the last chapter. All that's visible is your Author's Note. I don't know if it's purposeful or just a glitch in the site... Either way I'm not happy haha.
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  • From virgofemme on March 03, 2009
    Yet another very entertaining chapter! I was so very HAPPY to see that you had updated. :)

    Poor Harvey! While the Joker was having fun with him I couldn´t help but cringe.

    "Stop licking yourself, Harv! Hey, stop licking yourself!"

    LMAO!!! I loved that part!! The sick part of me LOL when i read that line!

    This was a gory chapter but I loved it! It was just the right amount of gore, not overdone. This chapter was WELL WORTH the wait. Keep up the wonderful work!

    I just love how the Joker decided to come out while Harvey was around..I was hoping that would happen. I just love how you write the Joker, I can visualize him so well whenever I read your stories. You really do make him come alive!

    Very nice work!!
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  • From noodlez on January 11, 2009
    oh! i seriously squealed when i saw you updated this, another fantastic chapter lovely! barn sex yum! can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From virgofemme on January 10, 2009
    I was so happy to see an update to this story! I love this! Great work, as usual, and the sex was VERY HOT. :D yayyy for smut!
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  • From oliversangel on January 01, 2009
    I know this has nothing to do with this story, and I apologize, but I noticed that you are also reading my favorite House story ever...A Prank Too Far. ^.^ I can't wait for an update on your stories. ^.^ XXOO
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  • From noodlez on December 22, 2008
    this is sooo good, you HAVE to update this. ive read your other stuff and this is by far my favorite!
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  • From virgofemme on December 17, 2008
    That filthy Maroni! I actually felt sorry for Jack, but then the Joker came out and I was actaully happy when he killed Maroni. Lol
    He was a dirty bastard!

    I feel for Rachel. Poor thing, she´s still in love with Jack, but more and more of him is dissapearing as the Joker takes over.

    Awesome work as usual! I was hooked on every word, from start to finish! I so look forward to the next update!
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  • From virgofemme on December 08, 2008
    Okay, after reading this Chapter with Rachel in the hospital, now I feel reallly bad for her. Not that I think rape is so hot or anything but any sexual interaction with the Joker turns me on. So you didn´t do anything wrong, you wrote it VERY well, and although I found it hot, I also did feel for her. But I can see I was the only one who thought the last chapter was hot, so I guess i´m a just a big ol´weirdo..lol.

    Anywhoooo..great work on this last chapter. Very emotional and so touching! Jack struggling against becoming the Joker, yet you know he isn´t able to keep the urges back. And the way you wrote his internal voices..very well done! This story is just simply BRILLIANT. I cannot wait for more!
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  • From ccangell3 on December 05, 2008
    Well, first off let me tell you that I wasn't necessarily turned on nor sickened by the rape, it was disturbing and I could feel her agony and shock when she saw the scar. Interesting to note, that it was a scar that made her realize it was Jack and not something else, like a birthmark or mole.

    As far as this chapter goes, I have to tell you I wasn't too thrilled in the beginning, but now having thought about it, the idea of Jack's struggle with the Joker trying to gain control is unique and can offer some really incredible chapters, the question is are you up to the Challenge? LOL!!!

    I predict this is going to be one hell of a story, but when its over, you will be exhausted and not from school. I can see you taking a break after this one, if never writing another Joker story, for awhile, quite awhile.

    Can't wait for more!!!
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  • From oliversangel on December 01, 2008
    Ohhh, my heart ached for Rachael. When she realized that the Joker was actually her Jack....Poor thing. *sigh* Do we get inside Joker's head next time? What he was thinking while all of that was happening? Did he remember her? Did he know, when he plucked her off the floor? Oooh, if he did, and he raped her anyways....*shivers* Poor Jack. Don't know how I can conjure up sympathy for him after what just happened, but I think anyone would go nuts after what happened to him. I like how you put in the fundraiser scene..that was one of my favorites from the movie. I am counting down the days until it comes to DVD. ^.^
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  • From virgofemme on December 01, 2008
    Okay, that was just AWESOME! Wonderful chapter, and so utterly hot!!!!!!!!!! I´ll probably have to read it at least a few times more. Great job!!!
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  • From virgofemme on November 23, 2008
    Oh yea..this gets better with each chapter!! One of my favorite parts was when the voices began talking to Jack. I´m guessing hat´s when he was tryly "becoming" the Joker. It was very well done. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and cannot wait for more!!
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  • From ccangell3 on November 22, 2008
    OMG are you kidding? This most definitely did NOT suck!!! True, I can't wait to get to the darker shit, but this was an incredible filler!!!

    WELL DONE!!! And am biting my nails for more!!!
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