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Reviews for Jack's Descent

By : blood-and-lust-87
  • From virgofemme on November 19, 2008
    I can´t wait to see what happens in Chapter 4! This is a really good story and this last Chapter only drew me in further. I know you´re busy but I do hope you´ll update soon!!
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  • From oliversangel on November 16, 2008
    Oh, that's so awful. I knew it was coming, I was praying that he wouldn't hurt poor Penny, but no dice I guess. I got chills when Jack growled, "Why so serious?" I can't believe the cops thought Jack killed his sister and mother too. Well, Rachael can testify that she saw Paul hurting Lenelle at least. Oh poor poor Jack. My heart ache for him. I mean, as I said before, I knew it was coming...but still. *snugs Jack* Poor baby. Great update!! Can't wait to read more!! XXOO
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 15, 2008
    HOLY MOLY!! This is AWESOME!! I LOVE it!!! And can't wait for more!!! How is he gonna respond towards Rachel and I LOVE how jealous Bruce was.


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  • From Nghtcrwlr on November 14, 2008
    oh please please continue
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  • From virgofemme on November 10, 2008
    Another great chapter...now I wait for an update! I´m looking forward to the angsty stuff :)
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  • From ccangell3 on November 09, 2008
    DAMN that school!!! This is fantastic!!! Seriously and I LOVE the fluff, it has to be there to set up everything, but I know your darkness will reign supreme!!! And Bruce's jealousy, YES!!!

    Can't wait for more!!! Keep up the TERRIFIC work!!!
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  • From oliversangel on November 08, 2008
    Oi Vey!! This is really lovely. Already ole Brucy is showing signs of jealousy. I suppose that will make their rivalrys that much more bitter, on down the line. I was very delighted to find this, I loved your other stories. I can't believe that bastard hit a little girl. Oh, I would put that man through so much torture....I think I've been reading too many Joker stories. LOL. Well, anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter, you really are fantastic love!! XXOO
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  • From Vyper on November 03, 2008
    This is a good story. I like it so far.
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  • From ccangell3 on November 03, 2008
    Yeah ok, got my answer. Man do I feel stupid now!!! LOL!!! Oh well, PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!
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  • From ccangell3 on November 03, 2008
    HOLY CRAP!! Nice beginning!!! I know I'm slow, so I still have no idea if Jack's dad is dead or just passed out. Maybe I should re-read!!! LOL!! I LOVE IT!!! And the interaction between everyone, especially Penny and Jack!!! Too cute!!!

    Please keep it coming!!!
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