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By : Jacksfavoritewench
  • From AddictedToJack on December 16, 2008
    I liked the ending actually!It was a fitting ending to a good story. Hope you write something more!
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  • From PrincessofthePearl on October 25, 2008
    Wow! I wasn't expecting it to end there, but you did a good job with it. It was kind of sad with Will being killed and whatnot, but it seems it kind of had to be done. At least Jack or Lizzie (but especially Jack!) didn't get hurt in the process.

    I liked this story a lot, it was a great read! I look forward to seeing more from you.

    ~Princess of the Pearl
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  • From PrincessofthePearl on October 16, 2008
    Aww, that was a really cute chapter! Although now I'm even more worried about Will coming along and ruining it all!

    Great job, up to par, as always!

    ~Princess of the Pearl
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  • From PrincessofthePearl on October 14, 2008
    “Yes…after the old miserable barnacle himself.” Ha! That made me laugh out loud.

    So Will won't hurt Jack or Lizzie (even though he'll try)? That's a relief.

    And baby makes three, how exciting!

    Good chapter, as always. Keep up the good work! I love this story!

    ~Princess of the Pearl

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  • From PrincessofthePearl on October 13, 2008
    Will certainly has lost all his marbles, but that won't stop me from hating the guy if he harm's one hair on Jack (or Lizzie's) head!

    Good chapter, keep it up!

    ~Princess of the Pearl
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  • From AddictedToJack on October 13, 2008
    I missed a couple of updates and ...Oh shit...Will is a hell of a bastard!!!Looks like Jack's punishment wasn't tough enough for him.I hate him more than ever!
    Continue soon!Hope he will get what he deserves...
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  • From Lulu on October 12, 2008
    Wow! Wonderfully written. I really can picture the characters with your dialogue! (I esp. like the way you write for Barbosa). GREAT WORK!!
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  • From PrincessofthePearl on October 12, 2008
    Uh-oh. Bad feelings ensuing. I'll try not to worry too much, though. Will might cause some trouble, but we all know that Jack can kick his ass (up and down) any day of the week!

    Good chapter, as always. Looking forward to more!

    ~Princess of the Pearl
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  • From PrincessofthePearl on October 11, 2008
    Aww, how sweet! Nice lil' chapter, I liked it. :D
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  • From PrincessofthePearl on October 10, 2008
    Great chapter, very well written!

    “I did not…I did not allow them t’ have their way with ye…I simply allowed them t’ decide what they wanted t’ do.” LOL! I loved this line, it was so Jack-like. I can totally imagine him saying that!

    I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Keep up the good work, darlin'!

    ~Princess of the Pearl
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  • From PrincessofthePearl on October 09, 2008
    Good chapter! Personally, I would prefer to have the graphic scenes of Will (and whatever it is the crew does to him) left up to my overactive imagination. However, it's YOUR story, so do what you want to do. You could include them if you want, just make sure to add a note at the beginning of the chapter so that anyone who is uncomforable with rape scenes can skip over it.

    Good job, luv, keep it up!
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  • From PrincessofthePearl on October 01, 2008
    Good chapter!

    I'm leaving town tomorrow and will be sad not to be able to check for updates! Keep up the good work, darlin'!

    ~Princess of the Pearl
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  • From AddictedToJack on September 28, 2008
    I like it so far!The whelp needs to get what he deserves but I must say I'm afraid of what Jack is up to,lol!
    Waiting for an update!!!
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  • From PrincessofthePearl on September 26, 2008
    First off, I want to say this story is good and has loads of potential. Good job!

    However, I'm not sure if Will would rape Elizabeth, no matter how angry and upset he was with her. And while being raped back for such a crime does seem a fitting punishment, the idea of Jack doing it makes him seem unredeemable.

    Still, I do like this story and am quite intrigued to see where you go with it!
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  • From SassySparrow on September 18, 2008
    Darlin', you really HAVE a creative mind! ;o) Will needs to be raped before he gets killed.... hehe... what an idea! Precisely the right punishment for him! Though I have to admit that I have a little problem with Jack doing that.... wonder what Lizzie thinks about this.
    Excellent work again! And thanks SO MUCH for updating so frequently, it really makes my day.
    Take care,
    ~Sassy~
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