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Reviews for Breaking Barriers (Chapter 28 up)

By : TheArtist
  • From ginabella on September 26, 2008
    Nice chapter.
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  • From ginabella on September 26, 2008
    Poor Sarah

    Nice chapter.
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  • From Vyper on September 26, 2008
    Well, let's hope the King didn't get his hopes completely crushed. I think Sarah might have been more willing had he held her and gently consoled her fears letting her know he cares. That would be a great way to woo her although he is afraid to show weakness. Perhaps it would have endeared her to him more and let her put her trust in him which would have helped his plans. Foolish man will definately get tennis elbow at this rate while beating himself silly to get rid of those blue balls if he doesn't figure out how to seduce a little virgin to his will. Now that would take power and making her love him would make him exceedingly powerful. After all how can one rule the world if one does not have such power since love is the most powerful thing in the world making even him do foolish things hmmmmmmmmm? Ah well, such is life. Men, the creatures are so simple to please and yet make such things so complex when women are not that difficult to figure out. Some flowers, candlight, a little soft music, poetry, chocolates, seduction, what is missing, oh the mood........and a nice slow dance for them both with her only in her nighty and he only in a pair of silk pj pants with his shirt open. Bring on the novel my dear...........
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  • From ginabella on September 26, 2008
    Nice chapter and I hope his plan gone a change because he will fall for her.
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  • From ginabella on September 26, 2008
    More I read this story, more I like it.
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  • From ginabella on September 25, 2008
    Wow you'r a good writer. I like the way you descript jareth's thought.
    nice one.
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  • From ginabella on September 25, 2008
    I think I'm gonna love this story.
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  • From ginabella on September 25, 2008
    Nice beginning.

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  • From Ikaru on September 25, 2008
    wow that is cool about out b-days....i don't know about any spells but it seemed to be a little more than just a little enchantment on sarahs part to have the goblin king that excited, and sarah didn't seem to be imune to the effects either...can't wait to see the sparks fly...
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  • From kookookitty on September 24, 2008
    *shakes head* the duplicity and intrigue that two people can get into! immaturity, misunderstandings and stupidity abound. i think the goblins would have less trouble. he doesn't realize that she was just as affected by the 'heat' as he was -- until...

    funny stuff, if only he would stop being so full of himself and quit the games he may get what he wants and what he needs.

    sorry about last time, i can never get to sleep and i never get enough.

    a great video, i know it's in japanese but it's a video and not only does it have great music with some great voices, there is a story! kind of reminiscent of the basic theme of most faery tales. just copy/paste the following code into youTube search: zVxogdi76SE

    i've been on a pink floyd kick so be happy i didn't leave you a code for 'the wall' 'what shall we do now' video >=) bad flowers! oh, what the heck! here it is: RXr_pJXKQAY

    ♥enjoy!
    ginny


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  • From Vyper on September 23, 2008
    I wonder how the poor man will sate his lust? Beating on things will only last so long and might give him tennis elbow........oh how lewd. heheheheheeeeee
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  • From Chikory on September 23, 2008
    LOL Sarah is in hot water
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  • From Vyper on September 22, 2008
    Very nice. Jereth is indeed a bit of a romantic. To woo and win his Lady would be a nice touch. I just hope Sarah also becomes a bit kinder to the King and that there is no tricks between the two of them. It would be nice to see the romantics have a chance at love. Still, it is yours so have fun and once again, keep writing. I am writing a Queen of the Damned story if you wish to review mine called What will he do? under Queen of the Damned movies. I usually only write Inuyasha stuff, but since Labryth was another favorite for me I appreciate your writing very much.
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  • From kookookitty on September 22, 2008
    a play? with a goblin cast? one thinks he's had a little too much wine or all his blood rushed somewhere other than his head. the one on his shoulders.

    and she agreed to produce it. lol

    i'm tired, half asleep and can't think. please, just pretend this says something complimentary and pertinent, okay? g'nite.

    ♥thank you♥
    ginny
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  • From Ikaru on September 22, 2008
    OMG...i just found this story and i have to say it is absolutly wonderfull!!!!I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
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