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Reviews for Breaking Barriers (Chapter 28 up)

By : TheArtist
  • From Vyper on September 30, 2008
    Fool of a man hesitated. Why do they like to do that? Infuriate what they want only to make them both miserable. I am certain Jereth will get his chance though to touch her once he gets over his fears. What a nincompoop, what an ultra maroon. This is a great story by the way and still waiting for Jereth's turn to be half naked in front of Sarah since she had to suffer him looking at things he shouldn't have seen yet. Turn about is fair play I say.
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  • From kookookitty on September 29, 2008
    surely she isn't thinking she has magic, maybe a connection with the labyrinth and castle that can grant/transform her fervent wishes but not any power within herself. although if she were to wish hard enough...

    but if she was really in control, it wouldn't be a dank, dark, depressing oubliette, it would be a bit more comfortable, light airy -- cushioned. she could always make herself a gym with exercise equipment as being stuck in her room for days on end her muscles are going to atrophy and get flabby. i don't know why i just thought of that, can't control where my brain goes sometimes. sorry.

    thank you,
    ginny



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  • From ginabella on September 29, 2008
    I think she can make magic...
    Just a question... How Jareth can take her magic? (it is the first reason he take her from her world because for her magic)
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  • From Vyper on September 28, 2008
    This is intriguing and I think that you will gain more hits. You are an exceptional writer. I have seven stories that I check in on. Most are unfinished and my Too Much Time On Their Hands in the Inuyasha section has graciously recieved over 7600 hits so do not worry. You will exceed me if you keep writing so well. Mine is almost 100 Chapters long and I started it last year. You are gaining as you go along. I only hope for the same with my other stories. Please keep writing and keep that image of Jereth and Sarah in your head for me. I do. Jereth, silky white see through pj pants so Sarah knows exactly how he feels... I know I am so bad.......hehehehehe :)
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  • From Ikaru on September 28, 2008
    haha!!*happydance* i knew it...Sarah wouldn't give up so easily!! But what's with Jareth's suddenly chipper mood? He was pritty pissed off the previous night, and he has been losing several nights of sleep because of his feelings for Sarah...he's got to crack eventually or realize he is actually falling for her for real. It's kinda cute that poor Sarah is still clueless about her blosoming fellings for Jareth, regardless of how much of a git he's been beeing. And now she has a secret place, but the question remains does Jareth really not know about it...shurly he would have senced the magic like Sarah did? oh well all in good time...really liked the chapter...can't wait to see what happens next...
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  • From ginabella on September 26, 2008
    Oh please update as soon as you can and write a long chapter.
    I'm in a hurry for what happen next.
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  • From ginabella on September 26, 2008
    Love this chapter.I'm in a hurry to read the next one.
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  • From ginabella on September 26, 2008
    Nice chapter.
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  • From ginabella on September 26, 2008
    *run to read the chapter*
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  • From kookookitty on September 26, 2008
    actually, the flower's are a scene from the movie 'pink floyd the wall', i prefer the music from the live version but the movie has it's merits.

    jareth needs to realize that to be an effective actor one needs to draw on existing emotions -- and that she may not have shared 'everything' with her little goblin friend.

    expand your horizons! ~ rin` ~ traditional japanese with an edge:
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    -P4JyAlbglw
    Ao0dHUgCuVw

    i'm enjoying this entertaining and amusing story! another plus is that you update frequently!

    ♥ domo arigatou gozaimasu ♥
    ginny


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  • From ginabella on September 26, 2008
    Hummm...I'm in a hurry to see how Jareth will feel when he gone sees Sarah.
    nice chapter.
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  • From Ikaru on September 26, 2008
    wow Jareth was really pissed..understandably so...but still sarah's assumption was also understandable...a pissed of male who you had successfuly turned on shortly before could possibly be capable of rape...but at least the goblin king had enough honor in him to not even consider that detestable act...but an unfortunate missunderstanding has developed between them, because jareth only ever hears half of the conversations between sarah and her goblin friend...and sarah giving up, bah not bloody likly...sigh...well enough of than nonsence...loved the chapter can't wait to see what you come up with next!!!
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  • From ginabella on September 26, 2008
    I like Curlique i think shes gonna be a good friend for Sarah.
    Nice chapter.
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  • From ginabella on September 26, 2008
    nice chapter.
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  • From ginabella on September 26, 2008
    Nice chapter again from you.
    I like this story.
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