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Reviews for Breaking Barriers (Chapter 28 up)

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  • From ginabella on October 06, 2008
    Finally! a kiss.
    Update soon I need to know what happen next.
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  • From ginabella on October 06, 2008
    Nice chapter.
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  • From Ikaru on October 06, 2008
    So Jareth is starting to realize his true feelings for Sarah, nothing like a little scare to bring out the truth in ones innerself. But he done mucked up again, losing a perfectly good opportunity to ravish an obviously more than willing Sarah, by letting his temper get the better of him. Now Sarah is not going to be as receptive of his advances anymore, or so she says i don't think her resolve will stay very strong if he kisses her like that again;)...Jareth has some serious payback heading his way in the near future if he keeps his little game up...well loved the chapter and eargerly await the next one, i like the pace the story is taking and i agree you can't rush a good romance...lol later!!
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  • From homophobichomosexual on October 05, 2008
    Oh god, that chapter was such a tease. So short! ;_; I'm stuck checking for updates each day thanks to you. Just don't stop being consistant. :D
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  • From Vyper on October 05, 2008
    Romance, then stupidity. Sounds familiar. I know how it is when a man misses you that desperately and that can sometimes lead to such powerful emotions that one forgets themselves. That was wonderful and perfect. I honestly think that Jereth had a right to be angry in some ways and it was refreshing to see him heartbroken for a second making him realize what he could lose. Now that he knows it is possible to lose Sarah forever I wonder what leaps and bounds he is willing to go through to keep her as his own. Still don't think he can act though.......or write..........
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  • From Ikaru on October 05, 2008
    Jareth took Sarah's note book!!! the cheeky bastard using Sarahs note book to make a play outta it then going and changing things around so Sarah gives up Toby...yeah like that would happen...i wonder if Eldrich really has Toby, or if he got the wrong kid...that would be hilarious if he did, then Jareth would lose his plan B...it would soo serve him write if that did happen...poor Sarah is heart broken because of unrequainted love, and who could blame her for thinking that way, Jareth goes hot and cold at the drop of a hat. Seriously he is either seriously pmsing, or is still going through puberty.I swear Jareth is worse than a bloody teenager trying to deal with their first crush. He seriously needs to learn how to treat Sarah, and get over his damned ego, if he keeps this up he'll lose her, and i don't think she'll be so willing to forgive a third time around...loved the chapter can't wait to see what you come up with next...hopefully a little rebellion on Sarahs part*crosses fingers* and maybe a little of Jareth being caught by Sarah in his jammies(provided he wears any tee hee)oh the possibilities.....*evil grin*
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  • From Vyper on October 04, 2008
    Jereth didn't even finish the stupid play? What an avid procrastinator. He is definately not what Darwin would approve of as mating material for a worthy female if he can't even finish what he started. Finish what he started........hn......that could mean many things you know like time alone in the bedroom doing his business. I swear that tennis elbow of his will not get any better if he doesn't let his putter finally hit those balls making it completely blue.
    Now let me see, he is going to use Toby to get to Sarah, but that is no way to woo a woman. I think he needs to go through some dating 101 classes or something because he has no idea on what to do so he is jacking himself all up. By the time he is done Sarah will have him running after his own tail in circles rather than getting the tail he wants from her.

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  • From Darksidedown on October 04, 2008
    Well lets hope the size of his ego is complimented elsewhere as well *waggles eyebrows* I can't believe he's dragging toby into this as well. He's trying to get her on side not too throw him out the closest window. I wonder how fast he can change into owl form. Besides surely by now he realises that Sarahs will when it comes to protecting Toby is way beyond anything he could hope to match. Her magic would more then likely nulify anything he tried to do with the boy.
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  • From kookookitty on October 04, 2008
    i've got a set of shackles, chains and a variety of whips if she needs them...

    is this a test to see what provokes her and her magic or is he looking for a dom?

    fun stuff!

    ♥ delighted ♥
    ginny
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  • From ginabella on October 03, 2008
    Nice chapter.
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  • From Darksidedown on October 02, 2008
    I figured I have been reading this from day one, I better review, bare with me....english is not my first language.

    Jareth better be careful or he's gonna get more then just a magic backlash. He's moods are going carzier then a monkey in mating season.
    WHat did you mean when in the Libaray scene Jareth stopped, thinking that is he 'had her' it would forfiet his kingdom? WOuldn't she be alluring with her magical abilities..an asset.? Not to mention having Sarah herslef.
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  • From Vyper on October 02, 2008
    I believe an added handsome male character is in dire need in this story to get that pain in the ass to act. Perhaps a bit of jealousy is just what the doctor ordered and Sarah should have nibbled that frickin dork's ear. I can't believe how he didn't ravish her and how she let him get away with not doing it. While making out she could have gotten the journal back.......or just made out some more........or gotten the journal and made out some more leading to ravishing. Either way, great chapter and I just hope Jereth can act because he is doing a lousy job so far. Sarah like 10 and Jereth only like 2 on the bed post marks of who seduced who. I really think Jereth needs to learn the word 'win' rather than the word I am a pretty boy cad who can't get a date. What a dork.
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  • From ginabella on October 01, 2008
    Nice chapter.

    It would be fun if another Fae character could be integrated and put a lot jealous Jareth. Maybe it could eliminate his pride.
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  • From Ikaru on October 01, 2008
    ohhh boy Jareth fucked up big time, and Sarah is beyond pissed. But she's got every right to be pissed...he was being a royal git!! somebody needs to beat down that jinormous ego of his, and I think Sarah is just the person to do it, and they need to break that spell over Curlique, it's just causing Jareth and Sarah more problems than it is worth. And Sarah may be slightly spoiled, but he is the one bringing out the bitch in her with his horomonal swings, and he is just as guilty of spoiling her, though possibly unintentionally on his part, by showering her with gifts. Are we absolutly certain Jareth isn't PMSing? His mood swings put mine to shame on my worst days, honestly if anyone is spoiled he is....anyhow loved the chapter...can't wait to see what waits around the bend...
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  • From kookookitty on September 30, 2008
    he is the one with no self control and then he takes his anger out on her. boy needs to go take a cold shower or 'take care' of himself in the shower before and after he sees her if he's going to act like that! she should have slapped him.

    one hopes he comes to his senses and is feeling even a little contrite. he should punish himself and not her, she did nothing but shiver a little at his advances.

    *growls*

    ♥ thank you,
    ginny
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