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By : TheArtist

From kookookitty on October 13, 2008
she's gotta get into some black leather and satin and dress the part. a nice leather bustier, long satin wrap skirt--purple or dark red, stiletto heels, hair--up and messy. or *checks closet* how about--a '30's vintage 'vamp' gown with beaded bodice in clingy silk cr�pe. just ignore me, i hadn't worn that dress in almost three decades (yes i still have it[and others], it's the color of the navigation tabs on affn). if one is going to stage a coup d'�tat one must have the necessary weapons in one's arsenal.

one hopes she can get him to spill. one believes she would willingly help him restore his kingdom to to it's former glory, all he has to do is be honest and ask, without all of his subterfuge and deception. she is a very caring and helpful person.

thank you,
ginny

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From ginabella on October 13, 2008
Nice chapter. I'm in a hurry to see what Sarah gonna do with the kiss scene.
Waiting impatiently for the next chapter.
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From Vyper on October 12, 2008
This is very good. Hopefully Sarah won't completely ruin things with Jereth who is starting to show some feelings in there.
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From Icklekins on October 11, 2008
I have to say, I like your story, and I am looking forward to more. I just found it last night and will say, I'm disappointed it's still in the process of being written. I will eagerly look for more updates as time goes on, but I hope you finish this soon! The tension is driving me mad.

:P
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From SeayKat on October 11, 2008
Hi! I have just started your story and I am really enjoying it. I always wanted a sequel to Labyrinth, to see Sarah and Jareth together again. I like how your staying true to the characters and giving them a chance to develop feelings for each other in a realistic way. Their interaction is very angsty, I love it. I'm looking forward to when they finally admit their feelings and we can see where this relationship will go. The Toby issue is going to cause problems, obviously, and I am curious how the play and performance will go, so I am can't wait for the next update. Keep writing :)
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From kookookitty on October 10, 2008
overwhelmed-- one hopes the stresses of life ease up on you and you can find a moments respite in your own cushioned oubliette.

nice that she's thinking about possibilities, maybe she could, as a test, wish for a few 'creature comforts' in her hideaway.

i'm just teasing, you know i love ya♥
ginny
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From Vyper on October 09, 2008
This is cool, but if she hid herself how was he going to keep up that lame excuse that his tennis elbow was keeping him from entering her room? Sure it is bad he spys on her, but maybe he could like write something good instead of stupid and like seduce her rather then make the play into 'all about his feelings'. A play isn't the same as being ravished. He needs to just do that and then he won't have to worry about acting. He forgets his lines all the time. I mean since the guy can't act he might as well just be himself. Oh, that would require emotions, duh.....I forgot Jereth is a dork.
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From Darksidedown on October 09, 2008
Thank you that chapter was a lovely view into characters mind sets. It was also time to catch own our breath from the whirlwind of Lust spite and arrogance that is the Sarah/Jareth show. *meow* I still think Jareths has some tormoent coming too him but no longer think he should go out the window.
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From Ikaru on October 08, 2008
oh wow...the play is a little out there, with Sarah falling head over heels for the gobiln king and all, and being willing to give up Toby, but geeze he very effectivly told Sarah how he felt four years prior...and Sarah seemed to have understood, and showed him the affection he so desperately desired, she broke his heart, and he was being wise not to let himself fall so easily twice, but it is already too late...he is desperately in love with the girl, and she is falling hopelessly in love with him. Her actions on the stage after his monolog show that their is hope for the relationship...and poor Curlique's sence of timeing is horrible, if she hadn't said anything, they would have had a nice tender kiss, and thru it been able to read the others true feelings, or if nothing else be able to forgive each other a little. I still wonder if the boy Eldrich has is really Toby or not, if it is and Sarah finds out...she may not be able to forgive Jareth, no matter how much she loves him....
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From ginabella on October 07, 2008
Loved this chapter.
Waiting impatiently for your next update.
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From kookookitty on October 07, 2008
oh i think he's cracking, but i believe it's his brain.

♠ and now for a pink floyd moment:

Good morning, Worm your honor.
The crown will plainly show
The prisoner who now stands before you
Was caught red-handed showing feelings
Showing feelings of an almost human nature;
This will not do.
...
Crazy,
Toys in the attic I am crazy,
Truly gone fishing.
They must have taken my marbles away.
...
Crazy,
Over the rainbow, I am crazy,
Bars in the window.
'The Trial' ~Roger Waters

so is he serious about the script or is there a 'real one' that has nothing to do with their past encounter? or even shows what actually happened?

he gives her a clue that he isn't totally heartless and than just dismisses her. my husband with his schizophrenic, paranoid, delusional, fractured mind has got nothing on jareth. sometimes i have difficulty dealing with him but i would actually kill jareth... then i would rip out the water cooler, toss it out the window and run away.

♥ a frustratingly dubious pleasure ♥
♥♥♥you know i love ya♥♥♥
ginny

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From Vyper on October 07, 2008
That line he made her say was so dang lame. Fear me. Is that supposed to be romantic? She should have just said to him fear me and kiss me again like you did unless you are a chicken. Then bocked at him. Maybe then he would do something interesting. Anyway, this chapter was good, but why the hell had they been interupted. What a pain in the but, also Jereth still can't act. He can't write very well either if he wanted to impress Sarah. Oh well, he is good at acting like himself and she should call him an ass more often. Afterall, she isn't a little girl anymore and the day the dork figures that out he may get somewhere. It is like totally 'I can bring home the bacon, fry it up in a pan, and never let you forget your a man cause Sarah is a woman, asulee?' Or Yo, dude I like grew boobs see? I totally am out of my training bra. When will he realize that he is like a man and she is like a woman. Sheesh..........Sarah isn't just a girl in the world although that is all he wants her to be......No Doubt......
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From Darksidedown on October 07, 2008
Nice chapter love Jareth rained himself in very well. Must have confused Sarah even more. Not much time gotta rush to work..I
ll give you dirty ideas in the next review.
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From kookookitty on October 07, 2008
one doesn't understand his reasoning and thought process. maybe it's from being around goblins all of the time he's begun thinking like one. how is kidnapping her brother again going to endear him to her. one believes that if he's thinking of using the boy as a last resort bargaining chip, he miscalculated--she'll fry his skinny ass.

oh it's so comforting to sit in a moldy old oubliette on a convenient rock. i'm all for that, really, i would rather hide under the bed. there are probably spiders--nasty giant ones--that talk.

oh well, i didn't make much sense but i'm too tired to come up with witty, you'll just have to settle for humorless and tedious.

here make some

irish potatoes

♦ 1/4 cup butter, softened
♦ 1/2 (8 ounce) package cream cheese
♦ 1 teaspoon vanilla extract
♦ 4 cups confectioners' sugar
♦ 2 1/2 cups flaked coconut
♦ 1 tablespoon ground cinnamon

DIRECTIONS

1. In a medium bowl, beat the butter and cream cheese together until smooth. Add the vanilla and confectioners' sugar; beat until smooth. Using your hands if necessary, mix in the coconut. Roll into balls or potato shapes, and roll in the cinnamon. Place onto a cookie sheet and chill to set. If desired, roll potatoes in cinnamon again for darker color.

*Stud each 'potato' with a few small pieces of chopped nuts to simulate a potato's 'eyes'.

a pleasure,
ginny

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From Darksidedown on October 06, 2008
You know when Sarah has enough of his male pms (which is actually a real thing)and he backs of again she'll proably magic him tied down on her bed naked and go all Warrior woman on his ass. And he'll love it. Asshole. LOL Maybe she should just put on a little show for him. Relieve her own tensionw ithout a care with him watching. Might lead him to get a clue and do it himself.
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